Re: [sidr] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ymbk-sidr-transfer-00.txt

Stephen Kent <kent@bbn.com> Tue, 02 June 2015 19:44 UTC

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Subject: Re: [sidr] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ymbk-sidr-transfer-00.txt
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Randy,

I reviewed you doc and have a number of suggested edits, plus a few 
comments.

I have attached a PDF of the edited doc (MS Word change tracking) to 
this message.

A few high order comments:

     - I like the diagrams. they are helpful in describing the different 
cases
     - I don't consider myself to be on the hook for a "torn Euro" protocol
     - I think the doc should distinguish between transfers of "live" 
address space
       vs. transfers of space that is not currently in use. The former 
are more
       complex tan the latter and thus merit a different discussion
     - the text does not yet adequately describe the steps that need to 
take place
       when the Buyer or Seller are not directly under a Swing Point.
     - the TAO doc described a procedure for resource transfer that 
avoids the
       concern you cited in Section 5.

Steve