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"Ogaki, Kenichi" <ke-oogaki@kddi.com> Fri, 04 March 2022 04:06 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13.txt
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Hi Authors,

Thanks for accommodating our request.

If only the links, 1-0-1, 1-2-1, 1-3-1, 2-1-1, 2-0-1 and 3-1-1, in Figure 4 are TE Enabled, it's friendly to touch on that in the 1st paragraph of B.2.
It's also better to explicitly describe what S11~S53 in Figure 5 means? (segment)

Thanks,
Kenichi

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Subject: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13.txt


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture and Signaling WG of the IETF.

        Title           : YANG Data Model for SR and SR TE Topologies on MPLS Data Plane
        Authors         : Xufeng Liu
                          Igor Bryskin
                          Vishnu Pavan Beeram
                          Tarek Saad
                          Himanshu Shah
                          Stephane Litkowski
        Filename        : draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13.txt
        Pages           : 53
        Date            : 2022-03-01

Abstract:
   This document defines a YANG data model for Segment Routing (SR)
   topology and Segment Routing (SR) traffic engineering (TE) topology,
   using MPLS data plane.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo/

There is also an htmlized version available at:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13


Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts


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