Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13.txt

Hi Kenichi,

Thanks for checking on this and providing further comments and suggestions.
Will update the document to improve.
Best,
- Xufeng

On Thu, Mar 3, 2022 at 11:06 PM Ogaki, Kenichi <ke-oogaki@kddi.com> wrote:

> Hi Authors,
>
> Thanks for accommodating our request.
>
> If only the links, 1-0-1, 1-2-1, 1-3-1, 2-1-1, 2-0-1 and 3-1-1, in Figure
> 4 are TE Enabled, it's friendly to touch on that in the 1st paragraph of
> B.2.
>
[Xufeng]: Yes. Will add some descriptions.

>
> It's also better to explicitly describe what S11~S53 in Figure 5 means?
> (segment)
>
[Xufeng]:  S11~S53 are SR-enabled routers in the underlay topology. Do you
feel that the prefix is confusing? Do you think that a different prefix is
better, or the previous description statement is good enough?

>
>
> Thanks,
> Kenichi
>
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> *Subject:* [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13.txt
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture and
> Signaling WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : YANG Data Model for SR and SR TE Topologies on
> MPLS Data Plane
>         Authors         : Xufeng Liu
>                           Igor Bryskin
>                           Vishnu Pavan Beeram
>                           Tarek Saad
>                           Himanshu Shah
>                           Stephane Litkowski
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13.txt
>         Pages           : 53
>         Date            : 2022-03-01
>
> Abstract:
>    This document defines a YANG data model for Segment Routing (SR)
>    topology and Segment Routing (SR) traffic engineering (TE) topology,
>    using MPLS data plane.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo/
>
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13
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