Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13.txt

[Xufeng Liu <[e-mail]>]

Hi Kenichi,

Thanks for the feedback. We will do the updates as requested.
Best,
- Xufeng

On Fri, Mar 18, 2022 at 10:00 PM Ogaki, Kenichi <[e-mail]> wrote:

> Hi Xufeng,
>
> Thanks for reply.
>
> [Xufeng]:  S11~S53 are SR-enabled routers in the underlay topology. Do you
> feel that the prefix is confusing? Do you think that a different prefix is
> better, or the previous description statement is good enough?
>
> This is also editorial trivia, not technical one.
> It's enough to just add an explanation for Sxx to the description
> statement.
>
> Thank
> Kenichi
>
>
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> *From:* Xufeng Liu <[e-mail]>
> *Sent:* Saturday, March 19, 2022 9:53 AM
> *To:* 大垣 健一
> *Cc:* [e-mail]
> *Subject:* ***フリーメール*** Re: [Teas] I-D Action:
> draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13.txt
>
> Hi Kenichi,
>
> Thanks for checking on this and providing further comments
> and suggestions. Will update the document to improve.
> Best,
> - Xufeng
>
> On Thu, Mar 3, 2022 at 11:06 PM Ogaki, Kenichi <[e-mail]> wrote:
>
>> Hi Authors,
>>
>> Thanks for accommodating our request.
>>
>> If only the links, 1-0-1, 1-2-1, 1-3-1, 2-1-1, 2-0-1 and 3-1-1, in Figure
>> 4 are TE Enabled, it's friendly to touch on that in the 1st paragraph of
>> B.2.
>>
> [Xufeng]: Yes. Will add some descriptions.
>
>>
>> It's also better to explicitly describe what S11~S53 in Figure 5 means?
>> (segment)
>>
> [Xufeng]:  S11~S53 are SR-enabled routers in the underlay topology. Do you
> feel that the prefix is confusing? Do you think that a different prefix is
> better, or the previous description statement is good enough?
>
>>
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Kenichi
>>
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>> *From:* Teas <[e-mail]> on behalf of
>> [e-mail] <[e-mail]>
>> *Sent:* Wednesday, March 2, 2022 2:19:35 AM
>> *To:* [e-mail] <[e-mail]>
>> *Cc:* [e-mail] <[e-mail]>
>> *Subject:* [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13.txt
>>
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture and
>> Signaling WG of the IETF.
>>
>>         Title           : YANG Data Model for SR and SR TE Topologies on
>> MPLS Data Plane
>>         Authors         : Xufeng Liu
>>                           Igor Bryskin
>>                           Vishnu Pavan Beeram
>>                           Tarek Saad
>>                           Himanshu Shah
>>                           Stephane Litkowski
>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13.txt
>>         Pages           : 53
>>         Date            : 2022-03-01
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    This document defines a YANG data model for Segment Routing (SR)
>>    topology and Segment Routing (SR) traffic engineering (TE) topology,
>>    using MPLS data plane.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo/
>>
>> There is also an htmlized version available at:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13
>>
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org:
>> :internet-drafts
>>
>>
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