Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13.txt
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Subject: Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13.txt
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Hi Xufeng, Thanks for reply. [Xufeng]: S11~S53 are SR-enabled routers in the underlay topology. Do you feel that the prefix is confusing? Do you think that a different prefix is better, or the previous description statement is good enough? This is also editorial trivia, not technical one. It's enough to just add an explanation for Sxx to the description statement. Thank Kenichi Get Outlook for iOS<https://aka.ms/o0ukef> ________________________________ From: Xufeng Liu <xufeng.liu.ietf@gmail.com> Sent: Saturday, March 19, 2022 9:53 AM To: 大垣 健一 Cc: teas@ietf.org Subject: ***フリーメール*** Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13.txt Hi Kenichi, Thanks for checking on this and providing further comments and suggestions. Will update the document to improve. Best, - Xufeng On Thu, Mar 3, 2022 at 11:06 PM Ogaki, Kenichi <ke-oogaki@kddi.com<mailto:ke-oogaki@kddi.com>> wrote: Hi Authors, Thanks for accommodating our request. If only the links, 1-0-1, 1-2-1, 1-3-1, 2-1-1, 2-0-1 and 3-1-1, in Figure 4 are TE Enabled, it's friendly to touch on that in the 1st paragraph of B.2. [Xufeng]: Yes. Will add some descriptions. It's also better to explicitly describe what S11~S53 in Figure 5 means? (segment) [Xufeng]: S11~S53 are SR-enabled routers in the underlay topology. Do you feel that the prefix is confusing? Do you think that a different prefix is better, or the previous description statement is good enough? Thanks, Kenichi Get Outlook for iOS<https://aka.ms/o0ukef> ________________________________ From: Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:teas-bounces@ietf.org>> on behalf of internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> <internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org>> Sent: Wednesday, March 2, 2022 2:19:35 AM To: i-d-announce@ietf.org<mailto:i-d-announce@ietf.org> <i-d-announce@ietf.org<mailto:i-d-announce@ietf.org>> Cc: teas@ietf.org<mailto:teas@ietf.org> <teas@ietf.org<mailto:teas@ietf.org>> Subject: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13.txt A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture and Signaling WG of the IETF. Title : YANG Data Model for SR and SR TE Topologies on MPLS Data Plane Authors : Xufeng Liu Igor Bryskin Vishnu Pavan Beeram Tarek Saad Himanshu Shah Stephane Litkowski Filename : draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13.txt Pages : 53 Date : 2022-03-01 Abstract: This document defines a YANG data model for Segment Routing (SR) topology and Segment Routing (SR) traffic engineering (TE) topology, using MPLS data plane. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo/ There is also an htmlized version available at: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te-topo-13 Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts _______________________________________________ Teas mailing list Teas@ietf.org<mailto:Teas@ietf.org> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/teas _______________________________________________ Teas mailing list Teas@ietf.org<mailto:Teas@ietf.org> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/teas [https://ipmcdn.avast.com/images/icons/icon-envelope-tick-round-orange-animated-no-repeat-v1.gif]<https://www.avast.com/sig-email?utm_medium=email&utm_source=link&utm_campaign=sig-email&utm_content=webmail&utm_term=icon> Virus-free. www.avast.com<https://www.avast.com/sig-email?utm_medium=email&utm_source=link&utm_campaign=sig-email&utm_content=webmail&utm_term=link>
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- Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te… Ogaki, Kenichi
- Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te… Xufeng Liu
- Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te… Ogaki, Kenichi
- Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-yang-sr-te… Xufeng Liu
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