Re: [Terminology] Guidance for NIST Staff on Using Inclusive Language in Documentary Standards (NISTIR 8366)

Niels ten Oever <lists@digitaldissidents.org> Fri, 30 April 2021 08:04 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Terminology] Guidance for NIST Staff on Using Inclusive Language in Documentary Standards (NISTIR 8366)
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On 29-04-2021 23:10, Christian Huitema wrote:
> 
> On 4/29/2021 1:50 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
>> On 30-Apr-21 08:17, Keith Moore wrote:
>>> On 4/29/21 3:45 PM, Nick Doty wrote:
>>>> Today, NIST has published this Internal Report on "using inclusive
>>>> language" publicly, in part because it may be useful to other
>>>> standards groups interested in clarity and inclusiveness of terminology.
>>>>
>>>> Blog post/announcement:
>>>> https://www.nist.gov/news-events/news/2021/04/nists-inclusive-language-guidance-aims-clarity-standards-publications
>>>> <https://www.nist.gov/news-events/news/2021/04/nists-inclusive-language-guidance-aims-clarity-standards-publications>
>>>>
>>>> NISTIR 8366:
>>>> https://doi.org/10.6028/NIST.IR.8366
>>>> <https://doi.org/10.6028/NIST.IR.8366>
>>>>
>>>> I think both the blog post and the report itself do a good job of
>>>> describing the particular goals, including some examples (but not
>>>> especially long lists), and pointing to other resources that might be
>>>> useful for writing standards that are clear and respectful to a wide
>>>> range of readers.
>>>>
>>>> Hope this helps,
>>>> Nick
>>> I could _almost_ support just using this document, especially if it
>>> would get IETF out of the business of trying to write its own.   Then we
>>> could all just get back to work.
>> Yes. The IESG could suggest to the RFC Editor team to add an informative
>> reference to the NIST document to the style guide, and remind the IETF
>> that Internet-Drafts should aim to adhere to the RFC style guide,
>> and we're done.
>>
>> (Clearly NIST is not international in scope, and the IETF is, but since
>> our shared working language is more or less American English, it seems
>> reasonable.)
> 
> +1. One of the best ways to make progress quickly.
> 

I would support this as well - small suggestion: the easier way to it may be linking in the style guide to:

https://github.com/ietf/terminology/

and adding the NIST as a reference there. That way we would have some version control and could iterate when needed. 

All the best,

Niels


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