Re: [tlp-interest] A clerical correction to the IETF Trust Legal Provisions 5.0

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Wed, 25 August 2021 07:31 UTC

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Subject: Re: [tlp-interest] A clerical correction to the IETF Trust Legal Provisions 5.0
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On 2021-8-25, at 0:19, Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> wrote:
> (b) I strongly suggest adding a note something like
> 
> "Between <date1> and <date2> this document erroneously referred to the Revised license as the 'Simplified' license, but the text of the license was always as intended."

+1

We might also want to add something about some/most RFCs between 5245-9118 (but please verify these numbers) having incorrect boilerplate text.

Thanks,
Lars