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Re: [urn] draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-17

"Svensson, Lars" <L.Svensson@dnb.de> Wed, 02 May 2018 07:10 UTC

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From: "Svensson, Lars" <L.Svensson@dnb.de>
To: R Atarius <r_atarius@yahoo.com>, "urn@ietf.org" <urn@ietf.org>
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Hi Roozbeh, all,

Thanks, then I have no more comments and as far as I’m concerned this request can move on.

Best,

Lars

From: R Atarius [mailto:r_atarius@yahoo.com]
Sent: Tuesday, May 01, 2018 11:20 PM
To: Svensson, Lars <L.Svensson@dnb.de>; urn@ietf.org
Subject: Re: draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-17

Thanks
Done!

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From: "Svensson, Lars" <L.Svensson@dnb.de<mailto:L.Svensson@dnb.de>>
To: R Atarius <r_atarius@yahoo.com<mailto:r_atarius@yahoo.com>>; "urn@ietf.org<mailto:urn@ietf.org>" <urn@ietf.org<mailto:urn@ietf.org>>
Sent: Monday, April 23, 2018 3:13 AM
Subject: RE: draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-17

Hi Roozbeh,

On Friday, April 13, 2018 1:53 AM, R Atarius [mailto:r_atarius@yahoo.com<mailto:r_atarius@yahoo.com>] wrote:

> new revision has been uploaded.
>
> https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-17.txt


Thanks, as promised I've now read the complete I-D again.

Tiniest nits:

1) The declaration of syntactic structure uses "pchar" and "pct-encoded" without defining them anywhere. You might want to add something along the lines "'pchar' and 'pct-encoded' are defined in RFC 3986".

2) In the references section, the entry for SC.R4002-0 has "Version 10.0" in the text but the URL and the linked document say Version 12.0.

Best,

Lars

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