Re: [Uta] Second WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525bis-05
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Subject: Re: [Uta] Second WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525bis-05
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On 2/14/22 5:01 AM, Olle E. Johansson wrote: > A nit-picking small comment. The abstract ends like this: > > This document was published as RFC 7525 when the industry was in the > midst of its transition to TLS 1.2. Years later this transition is > largely complete and TLS 1.3 is widely available. Given the new > environment, updated guidance is needed. > > When published, this is the needed updated guidance. > > “This document updates the guidance, given the new environment.” > > would be better. Agreed. Thanks for the suggestion. Peter
- [Uta] Second WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525bis-05 Valery Smyslov
- Re: [Uta] Second WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525b… Olle E. Johansson
- Re: [Uta] Second WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525b… Olle E. Johansson
- Re: [Uta] Second WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525b… Salz, Rich
- Re: [Uta] Second WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525b… Peter Saint-Andre
- Re: [Uta] Second WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525b… Yaron Sheffer
- Re: [Uta] Second WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525b… Salz, Rich
- Re: [Uta] Second WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525b… Olle E. Johansson
- Re: [Uta] Second WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525b… Salz, Rich
- Re: [Uta] Second WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525b… Valery Smyslov