Re: [v6ops] new draft: draft-servin-v6ops-monitor-ds-ipv6

Hi Arturo,
  Great to see there is some working on this.
  Just two comments, not big changes:
  Both in the introduction section:

1)
"A good monitor solution allows to:"

I think it should be changed for something like this:

"A good monitor solution -among other things- allows to":

2)
:

Change "Determinate which actions may solve a problem"
by
"Determine which actions may solve a problem"

Best regards,

Alejandro,

On 7/13/13, Arturo Servin <aservin@lacnic.net> wrote:
> Hi,
>
>     We have sent this draft about considerations and recommendations to
> monitor IPv6 and dual-stack networks and services. We have been talking
> with people deploying IPv6 and we have found that not all monitor their
> networks and not many monitor them properly. We also found some
> challenges in monitor implementations that not fully support IPv6
> monitoring technologies (snmp, netflow, ipfix, ipv6 transport). Even
> though monitoring v6 networks is as critical as doing it in v4, we have
> not found many documents explaining how that has to be done (at least
> guides with free access or up to date).
>
>     There are also some misconceptions about monitoring IPv6, for
> example SNMPv3 != SNMP+IPv6, or that you cannot collect IPv6 data and
> send them on IPv4 that we wanted to clarify.
>
>      We collected some recommendations from informal conversations with
> people during some training and NOGs meeting during this year but we
> need some more input. We will be sharing this draft with other forums to
> get more inputs but we wanted to share it here first.
>
> Best wishes,
> Arturo and Mariela
>
> On 7/13/13 9:45 AM, fred@cisco.com wrote:
>> A new draft has been posted, at
>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-servin-v6ops-monitor-ds-ipv6. Please take
>> a look at it and comment.
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