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Re: [v6ops] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-dc-2xlat-02: (with COMMENT)

Tore Anderson <tore@fud.no> Wed, 14 October 2015 09:19 UTC

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Subject: Re: [v6ops] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-dc-2xlat-02: (with COMMENT)
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* Barry Leiba

> A small editorial thing in the abstract:
> 
>    This document describes an extension of the Stateless IP/ICMP
>    Translation for IPv6 Internet Data Centre Environments architecture
>    (SIIT-DC), which allows applications, protocols, or nodes that are
>    incompatible with IPv6, and/or Network Address Translation to operate
>    correctly in an SIIT-DC environment.
> 
> With the comma after "IPv6", it looks like you mean this:
> 
>    which allows
>    1. applications, protocols, or nodes that are
>       incompatible with IPv6
>    and/or
>    2. Network Address Translation
>    to operate correctly in an SIIT-DC environment.
> 
> ...when what you mean is this:
> 
>    which allows applications, protocols, or nodes that are
>    incompatible with
>    1. IPv6
>    and/or
>    2. Network Address Translation
>    to operate correctly in an SIIT-DC environment.
> 
> I suggest removing the comma.

Good catch - thank you!

Tore

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