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Re: [v6ops] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-dc-2xlat-02: (with COMMENT)

"Fred Baker (fred)" <fred@cisco.com> Wed, 14 October 2015 09:20 UTC

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From: "Fred Baker (fred)" <fred@cisco.com>
To: Tore Anderson <tore@fud.no>, Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
Thread-Topic: [v6ops] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-dc-2xlat-02: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [v6ops] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-dc-2xlat-02: (with COMMENT)
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Dumb question: is that something the RFC Editor could address rather than having Tore spin the draft?

> On Oct 14, 2015, at 3:10 AM, Tore Anderson <tore@fud.no> wrote:
> 
> * Barry Leiba
> 
>> A small editorial thing in the abstract:
>> 
>>   This document describes an extension of the Stateless IP/ICMP
>>   Translation for IPv6 Internet Data Centre Environments architecture
>>   (SIIT-DC), which allows applications, protocols, or nodes that are
>>   incompatible with IPv6, and/or Network Address Translation to operate
>>   correctly in an SIIT-DC environment.
>> 
>> With the comma after "IPv6", it looks like you mean this:
>> 
>>   which allows
>>   1. applications, protocols, or nodes that are
>>      incompatible with IPv6
>>   and/or
>>   2. Network Address Translation
>>   to operate correctly in an SIIT-DC environment.
>> 
>> ...when what you mean is this:
>> 
>>   which allows applications, protocols, or nodes that are
>>   incompatible with
>>   1. IPv6
>>   and/or
>>   2. Network Address Translation
>>   to operate correctly in an SIIT-DC environment.
>> 
>> I suggest removing the comma.
> 
> Good catch - thank you!
> 
> Tore

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