Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9388 <draft-ietf-cdni-additional-footprint-types-11> for your review
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Subject: Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9388 <draft-ietf-cdni-additional-footprint-types-11> for your review
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Resending with "reply to all" On Thu, Jun 22, 2023 at 6:11 PM Nir Sopher <nirsopher@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi, > > We had just released v12 of the draft. > Handling items 8 and 9. See additional comments inline. > We used "footprintunion" when we refer to the type name, and "footprint > union" when we refer to the logical object. > You might see the "footprintunion" including in section headers. I hope it > is OK. > > We have reviewed the doc for inclusive language (item 12) and did not find > any issue. > > Cheers, > Nir > > > On Thu, Jun 15, 2023 at 11:08 PM Nir Sopher <nirsopher@gmail.com> wrote: > >> Hi, >> And thank you very much for the comments. >> See responses inline. >> WRT item #8, #9, #12 we will do our best to prepare a new XML with the >> proper changes by the beginning of next week. >> Many thanks, >> Nir >> >> >> On Wed, Jun 7, 2023 at 6:22 AM <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote: >> >>> Authors and *AD, >>> >>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as >>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. >>> >>> 1) <!--[rfced] *AD - Should RFC 9241 be added to this document's header >>> as being updated by this document? >>> >>> We see the following in the Abstract: >>> >>> "This document also supplements RFC 9241 with relevant ALTO entity >>> domain types." >>> >>> And in the document announcement message (see >>> >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-cdni-additional-footprint-types/writeup/ >>> ): >>> >>> "The document also updates RFC 9241 with relevant ALTO entity >>> domain types." >>> >>> The current header only indicates RFC 8008 as being updated by this >>> document. >>> Please advise. >>> >>> --> >>> >> [NS/SM] >> We think it would be best to change the wording a bit: >> Original: >> >> This document also supplements RFC 9241 with relevant ALTO entity domain types. >> >> Suggested: >> >> Furthermore, this document defines a new entity domain type registered in the ALTO Entity Domain Types Registry, as defined in section 7.4 of RFC 9241. >> >> >>> >>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in >>> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor. >>> org/search. --> >>> >> >> [SM/NS] >> Can you please clarify? >> >> >>> >>> 3) <!-- [rfced] For clarity, may we update the sentence as follows ("is >>> defined" / "defines" and "matching" / "that match")? >>> >>> Also, may we update "Herein" to "This document"? Or does "Herein" >>> refer to RFC 8006? >>> >>> Original: >>> Herein is >>> defined the subdivisioncode simple data type, as well as a footprint >>> type allowing the dCDN to define constraints matching geographic >>> areas with better granularity, specifically using the [ISO3166-2] >>> Country Subdivision codes. >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> This document defines >>> the subdivisioncode simple data type as well as a footprint >>> type, allowing the dCDN to define constraints that match geographic >>> areas with better granularity, specifically using the [ISO3166-2] >>> Country Subdivision codes. >>> --> >>> >> >> [SM/NS] >> Agree, thanks >> >> >>> >>> >>> 4) <!-- [rfced] Appendix B of [RFC8008] shows "Semantics for Footprint >>> Advertisement"; we don't see "semantics of Footprint Objects >>> array" in that section. Please review and let us know if any >>> changes are necessary. >>> >>> Original: >>> Appendix B of [RFC8008] specifies the semantics of a Footprint >>> Objects array as a multiple, additive, footprint constraints. >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> Appendix B of [RFC8008] specifies the semantics of a Footprint >>> Advertisement (including a Footprint Objects array) as multiple, >>> additive, footprint constraints. >>> --> >>> >>> [SM/NS] >> Suggested: >> Appendix B of [RFC8008] specifies the semantics for Footprint >> Advertisement such that multiple footprint constraints are additive. >> >> >>> 5) <!-- [rfced] FYI, to avoid awkward hyphenation and article issues with >>> singular/plural, we updated this sentence. Please review and let >>> us know any objections. >>> >>> Original: >>> The footprint union also enables composing a countrycode and >>> subdivisioncode based footprint objects. >>> >>> Current: >>> The footprint union also enables the composing of footprint objects >>> based on the countrycode and subdivisioncode. >>> --> >>> >>> [SM/NS] >> Agreed. Thanks >> >>> >>> 6) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions about text in the Table in >>> Section 4.1. Note that we will communicate any necessary changes >>> to IANA upon completion of AUTH48. >>> >>> a) What does "hyphen-minus" mean? Is this trying to communicate that >>> some people might call it a hyphen and some might say minus sign? Or >>> something else? >>> >> >> [SM/NS] >> We can drop the "-minus" and leave only the "hyphen". >> Note that we took the "hyphen-minus" terminology for the actual ISO >> defining the country subdivision values: >> See https://www.iso.org/obp/ui/#iso:std:iso:3166:-2:ed-4:v1:en >> >> >>> b) Is this spacing correct? >>> >>> Original: >>> Characters from A-Z;0-9 >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> Characters from A-Z and 0-9 >>> >>> --> >>> >> [SM/NS] >> For the ease of reading we agree with your suggestion. >> Yet again, this was copied from the ISO defining the values structure >> >> >>> >>> 7) <!-- [rfced] For reference [OC-RR], the provided URL points to a page >>> that shows the document being both Version 2.0 and 2.1. Which >>> version is correct? >>> >>> Also, the provided URL shows two more contributors: Thomas Edwards and >>> Yoav Gressel. Would you like these to be added to the reference as >>> authors? >>> >>> Original: >>> [OC-RR] Finkelman, O., Ed., Hofmann, J., Klein, E., Mishra, S., >>> Ma, K., Sahar, D., and B. Zurat, "Open Caching - Request >>> Routing Functional Specification", Version 2.0, 15 January >>> 2021, <https://www.svta.org/product/open-cache-request- >>> routing-functional-specification/>. >>> Perhaps: >>> [OC-RR] Finkelman, O., Ed., Zurat, B., Sahar, D., Klein, E., >>> Hofmann, J., Ma, K.J., Stock, M., Mishra, S., Edwards, T., >>> and Y. Yoav, "Open Caching - Request Routing Functional >>> Specification", Version 2.0, 15 January 2021, >>> <https://www.svta.org/product/open-cache-request-routing- >>> functional-specification/>. >>> --> >>> >> [SM/NS] >> We will stick to version 2.0 >> We are working to get the OC-RR webpage updated to reflect version 2.0. >> We would also push forward adding Thomas Edwards to the authors list >> (Yoav is already listed in the document). >> Please note that in the proposal Yoav was added as "Y. Yoav" instead of >> "G. Yoav" or to be consistent "Gressel, Y." >> >> >>> >>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Terminology: Throughout the document, we spotted the >>> following issues related to terminology. Please review each >>> question below and let us know how to update, using old/new where >>> necessary. Note that you are welcome to update the xml file >>> itself if that is easier than explaining the changes via email. >>> >>> >>> 1) Please review the way that the following terms appear throughout the >>> document >>> with regard to capitalization, hyphenation, quotation, spacing, >>> phrasing, etc. and let us know >>> if/how we may make these terms consistent: >>> >>> a) object vs. Object >>> >>> CDNI Footprint object vs. CNDI Footprint Object >>> Footprint Objects vs. Footprint objects vs. footprint objects >>> >>> (Note that RFC 8006 uses Footprint object) >>> >> >> [SM/NS] we changed all instances to lower case "object" >> >>> >>> b) Footprint, Footprint Types, Footprint Values, Footprint Union >>> >>> footprint (as a general noun) >>> >>> Footprint Types vs. footprint-type vs. footprint types vs. >>> "footprint-type" >>> -See also "Country Code" footprint type and "IPv4CIDR" and "IPv6CIDR" >>> footprint types. >>> >>> Footprint-value vs. footprint value >>> >>> >>> Union Footprint type >>> "Footprintunion" footprint type >>> "Footprintunion" object >>> Footprint object of type "footprint union" >>> >>> [SM/NS] We are comparing the draft with previous RFCs and trying to come >> up wit a consistent scheme for different use cases >> 1) "Footprint Type": "type" should be in lower case unless it is part of >> the section header >> 2) "footprint-type": the dash is OK when it is part of an anchor or when >> it stand for the property name (in the different examples) >> 3) "Footprint Union": should be capitalized >> > ==> footprint union should be lower case > >> 4) "footprintunion" should be used in some cases - we are trying to >> understand where >> > ==> "footprintunion" is now used only when it stands for the actual > footprint type > >> >> >> c) Subdivision >>> >>> Subdivision Code Footprint Type >>> a footprint object of type "subdivisioncode" >>> SUBDIVISION Domain (and SUBDIVISION domain) >>> country Subdivision code vs. Country Subdivision codes >>> subdivisioncode vs. subdivision code >>> >>> [SM/NS] this case is similar to the "Footprint Union" case. We will work >> on it and would update >> > ==> "subdivisioncode" is now used only when it stands for the actual > footprint type > >> >> > >> >>> 2) For the following terms, would you like to match their use in past >>> RFCs, specifically RFC 8006? Please review the various styles that >>> appear in the document currently and our suggested updates to >>> make those forms consistent throughout the document and with RFC 8006. >>> >>> Current: >>> Country Code vs. countrycode vs. country code >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> countrycode >>> >>> Current: >>> ipv4cidr vs. IPv4CIDR >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> ipv4cidr >>> >>> Current: >>> ipv6cidr vs. IPv6CIDR >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> ipv6cidr >>> >>> --> >>> >>> [SM/NS] This is again the "footprint union" vs. "footprintunion" issue. >> We will find a consistent usage >> > ==> "ipv4cidr" /"ipv6cidr" are now used only when they stand for the > actual footprint types > >> > >> >>> 9) <!--[rfced]Please review the uses of the word "match" throughout the >>> document. >>> In some places, it is not clear that the constraint does not have to >>> match both patterns given. >>> >>> Examples with some possible updates to help the reader. >>> >>> Original: >>> The Footprint Object in this example creates a >>> constraint matching clients in the states of New Jersey and New York, >>> USA (ISO [ISO3166-2] codes "US-NJ" and "US-NY", respectively). >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> The Footprint Object in this example creates a >>> constraint that matches clients in the state of either New Jersey or New >>> York, >>> (ISO [ISO3166-2] codes "US-NJ" and "US-NY", respectively). >>> >> >> [SM/NS] Agreed >> >> >>> Original: >>> Using Footprint Objects of these types, one can define FCI Capability >>> Advertisement Object footprint constraints that match IPv4 or IPv6 >>> clients. However, the described "narrowing" semantic of the Footprint >>> Objects array, as described in Appendix B of [RFC8008], prevents the >>> usage of these objects together to create a footprint constraint that >>> matches IPv4 clients together with IPv6 clients. >>> >>> Perhaps (adding "either...but not both", cutting "together", and >>> combining the sentences): >>> Using Footprint Objects of these types, one can >>> define FCI Capability Advertisement Object footprint constraints that >>> match either IPv4 or IPv6 clients, but not both, due to the described >>> "narrowing" semantic of the Footprint Objects >>> array (Appendix B of [RFC8008]) that prevents the usage of >>> these objects together to create a footprint constraint that matches >>> IPv4 clients with IPv6 clients. >>> >> >> [SM/NS] Agreed >> >> >>> >>> Original: >>> Below is an example for an attempt at creating an object matching >>> IPv4 clients of subnet "192.0.2.0/24", as well as IPv6 clients of >>> subnet "2001:db8::/32". >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> Below is an example attempting to create an object that matches >>> IPv4 clients of subnet "192.0.2.0/24" as well as IPv6 clients of >>> subnet "2001:db8::/32". >>> --> >>> >> [SM/NS] Agreed >> >>> >>> >>> 10) <!--[rfced] Please review the following with regard to ISO citations. >>> >>> a) Is ISO 3166-2 the name of the code? If not, perhaps the following >>> change would be helpful to the reader. Note that there may be more >>> occurences, please review all as this is simply an example. >>> >>> Original: >>> The "subdivisioncode" data type specified in Section 2.1.1.1 >>> describes a country-specific subdivision using an [ISO3166-2] code. >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> The "subdivisioncode" data type specified in Section 2.1.1.1 >>> describes a country-specific subdivision using a code described in >>> [ISO3166-2]. >>> >> [SM/NS] >> Maybe: >> The "subdivisioncode" data type specified in Section 2.1.1.1 >> describes a country-specific subdivision using a code* as defined* in >> [ISO3166-2]. >> >> >>> b) Similar issue to that in a), but please also review if the second >>> parenthetical should also mention "alpha-2 codes"? >>> >>> Original: >>> In Figure 4, we create a constraint covering autonomous system 64496 >>> within the US (ISO [ISO3166-1] alpha-2 code "US") and the Ontario >>> province of Canada (ISO [ISO3166-2] code "CA-ON"). >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> In Figure 4, we create a constraint covering autonomous system 64496 >>> within the USA (ISO alpha-2 code "US" as described in [ISO3166-1]) and >>> the Ontario province of Canada (ISO code "CA-ON" as described in >>> [ISO3166-2]). >>> --> >>> >>> [SM/NS] Agreed >> >> >>> >>> 11) <!-- [rfced] Please review whether any of the notes in this document >>> should be in the <aside> element. 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- Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9388 <draft-i… Murray S. Kucherawy
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- Re: [auth48] [AD] [E] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9388 <dra… Rebecca VanRheenen
- Re: [auth48] [AD] Re: [E] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9388 … Mishra, Sanjay
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [E] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9388 <dra… Mishra, Sanjay
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [E] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9388 <dra… Nir Sopher
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- Re: [auth48] [AD] [E] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9388 <dra… Rebecca VanRheenen
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- Re: [auth48] [AD] [E] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9388 <dra… Mishra, Sanjay
- Re: [auth48] [AD] Re: [E] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9388 … Murray S. Kucherawy
- Re: [auth48] [AD] Re: [E] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9388 … Mishra, Sanjay
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [E] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9388 <dra… Rebecca VanRheenen
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [E] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9388 <dra… Mishra, Sanjay
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [E] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9388 <dra… Murray S. Kucherawy
- Re: [auth48] [AD] [E] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9388 <dra… Rebecca VanRheenen
- [auth48] [IANA] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9388 <draft… Rebecca VanRheenen
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- [auth48] [IANA #1276431] [IANA] Re: AUTH48: RFC-t… Amanda Baber via RT
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