Re: [C310] [AD - Erik Kline] Re: AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9033 <draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-18.txt> NOW AVAILABLE
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Jean, Thanks for this (weirdly, many emails on this thread keep ending up in my spam folder). I just reviewed rfc9033-auth48diff and everything looks good to me, including this new paragraph. Thanks again! On Thu, Apr 22, 2021 at 8:53 AM Jean Mahoney <jmahoney@amsl.com> wrote: > Tengfei, Pascal, and *AD (Erik), > > * Erik, please review the newly added one-paragraph section in the > Introduction (Section 1.2, Related Documents), and let us know if you > approve of the addition. > > NEW: > > 1.2. Related Documents > > This specification uses messages and variables defined in IEEE Std > 802.15.4-2015 [IEEE802154]. It is expected that those resources will > remain in the future versions of IEEE Std 802.15.4; in which case, > this specification also applies to those future versions. In the > remainder of the document, we use [IEEE802154] to refer to IEEE Std > 802.15.4-2015 as well as future versions of IEEE Std 802.15.4 that > remain compatible. > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9033.html#name-related-documents > > > Tengfei and Pascal, thank you for your responses. We have updated the > document with your feedback: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9033.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9033.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9033.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9033.xml > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9033-diff.html (all changes) > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9033-auth48diff.html (all AUTH48 > changes) > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9033-lastdiff.html (these > changes) > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9033-lastrfcdiff.html (these > changes side by side) > > We will await further word from you and your coauthors regarding other > AUTH48 changes and/or approval. > > Best regards, > > RFC Editor/jm > > > On 4/21/21 10:15 PM, Tengfei Chang wrote: > > Hi Jean, > > I replied inline: > > On Thu, Apr 22, 2021 at 12:32 AM Jean Mahoney <jmahoney@amsl.com> wrote: > >> Tengfei, Mališa, Diego, Xavi, and Pascal, >> >> Thank you for your quick responses! We have updated the document based on >> your feedback, and we have a few more questions below: >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9033.txt >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9033.pdf >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9033.html >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9033.xml >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9033-lastrfcdiff.html (these >> changes side by side) >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9033-auth48diff.html (changes >> made during AUTH48) >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9033-diff.html (all changes >> made to the text) >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9033-xmldiff.html (all changes >> made to the XML) >> >> >> Tengfei, would you like to update your email address in the document? It >> is currently tengfei.chang@inria.fr. >> > > *TC: Thanks for pointing this out. The email will not be available in a > few months, could you change to tengfei.chang@gmail.com > <tengfei.chang@gmail.com> for me? Thanks! * > >> >> >> May we expand the 6TiSCH acronym in the abstract? >> >> Current: >> This specification defines the 6TiSCH Minimal Scheduling Function >> (MSF). >> >> Perhaps: >> This specification defines the "IPv6 over the TSCH mode of >> IEEE 802.15.4e" (6TiSCH) Minimal Scheduling Function (MSF). >> >> >> * TC: Yes, you may. * > > * OLD:* > > * This specification defines the 6TiSCH Minimal Scheduling Function* > > * (MSF). * > > > *NEW:* > > * This specification defines the "IPv6 over the TSCH mode of * > > * IEEE 802.15.4e" (6TiSCH) Minimal Scheduling Function (MSF). * > > In Section 5.1, the hyperlinked "Step 2" in the following sentence goes to >> numbered item "2. When the value of NumCellsElapsed reaches MAX_NUM_CELLS:" >> >> * Reset both NumCellsElapsed and NumCellsUsed to 0 and go to >> Step 2. >> >> Should it instead go to Section 4.3 ("Step 2 - Receiving EBs")? If the >> link is correct (go to #2), then perhaps it should be >> rephrased as "restart #2"? >> >> * Reset both NumCellsElapsed and NumCellsUsed to 0 and restart >> #2. >> >> >> *TC: Go to #2 is correct. Just to clarify, #2 indicates this > sentence: When the value of NumCellsElapsed reaches MAX_NUM_CELLS:* > > * OLD:* > > *Reset both NumCellsElapsed and NumCellsUsed to 0 and go to* > > * #2. * > > > *NEW:* > > * Reset both NumCellsElapsed and NumCellsUsed to 0 and restart* > > * #2. * > > > >> May we move the following citation tag in Section 8 to improve >> readability? >> >> Current: >> If [IEEE802154] transmissions are observed ... >> >> Perhaps: >> If transmissions that rely on [IEEE802154] are observed ... or >> If transmissions that rely on LR-WPANs [IEEE802154] are observed ... >> > > *TC: Yes, you may. I think the first choice is good. IEEE802154 already > indicates it's for LR-WPANs.* > > * OLD:* > > * If [IEEE802154] transmissions are observed ...* > > > * NEW:* > > * If transmissions that rely on [IEEE802154] are observed ... * > > > >> And one more question inline marked with [JM] -- >> > > *TC: Sorry I missed that one. The comment 6) also pointed to the same > sentence and my response is nearly the same as JM suggested :-) * > *Please use JM's suggestion here.* > > *OLD: * > > > > * The node receives a valid frame from the > parent. The counter increments only when > the frame is a valid [IEEE802.15.4] frame. * > > *NEW:* > > *The counter increments only when a valid frame per [IEEE802.15.4] is > received by the node from its parent. * > > > >> On 4/21/21 4:15 AM, Tengfei Chang wrote: >> >> Dear all, >> >> Thanks for the quick responses! >> >> Dear RFC editor, >> >> Thanks for editing the document! >> I have response each questions inline below starting with *TC: (in* *bold >> and Italic) * >> >> Please let me know if there are any further questions regarding to the >> document. >> Thanks! >> >> Tengfei >> >> On Wed, Apr 21, 2021 at 2:49 PM <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote: >> >>> Authors, >>> >>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as >>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. >>> >>> 1) <!-- [rfced] We note that the sortRefs attribute is missing in >>> rfc element. Would you like the citations in the References sorted >>> alphabetically or by first use in the document? >>> --> >>> >>> * TC: We would like the citations in the References sorted >> alphabetically. Thanks!* >> >>> >>> 2) <!--[rfced] Mališa, do you prefer that your name appear as >>> "Malisa Vucinic" or "Mališa Vučinić" in this document (and other >>> documents in this cluster)? We note the latter appears on this page: >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/person/Mali%C5%A1a%20Vu%C4%8Dini%C4%87 >>> --> >>> >>> * TC: please refer to Malisa's response.* >> >>> >>> 3) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear >>> in the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. >>> --> >>> >>> * TC: please insert the following keywords, thanks!* >> >> *TSCH, communication schedule, 6P* >> >> >>> 4) <!-- [rfced] Does the following improve the readability of >>> the sentence? >>> >>> Current: >>> In case of a slot to transmit or receive, a channel is >>> assigned to the time slot. >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> For time slots for transmitting or receiving, a channel is >>> assigned to the time slot. >>> --> >>> >>> *TC: Yes, please use the rephrased sentence: * >> >> *OLD:* >> >> * In case of a slot to transmit or receive, a channel is* >> >> * assigned to the time slot. * >> >> >> * NEW:* >> >> * For time slots for transmitting or receiving, a channel is* >> >> * assigned to the time slot. * >> >> >>> 5) <!-- [rfced] We are having difficulty parsing the following: >>> >>> Current: >>> For interoperability purposes, the values of those parameters >>> can be referred from Appendix A. >>> >>> Purhaps: >>> For interoperability purposes, Appendix A provides guidance >>> on calculating the values of those parameters. >>> --> >>> >>> * TC: Please apply the following changes. The parameters' values are not >> calculated but arbitrary values, which are defined in Appendix A. * >> *So that two different implementations of MSF can interoperate by >> agreeing on same parameters values.* >> >> >> *OLD:* >> >> * For interoperability purposes, the values of those parameters * >> >> * can be referred from Appendix A.* >> >> >> * NEW:* >> >> * For interoperability purposes, Appendix A provides the reference >> values of those parameters. * >> >> >>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Please consider rephrasing to make this more precise. >>> --> >>> >>> *TC: It's rephrased as following.* >> >> *OLD: * >> >> >> >> * The node receives a valid frame from the >> parent. The counter increments only when >> the frame is a valid [IEEE802.15.4] frame. * >> >> *NEW:* >> >> *The counter increments, only when a valid [IEEE802.15.4] frame is >> received by the node form its parent. * >> >> >>> [JM] We have incorporated the new text but have moved the citation tag >> to improve readability. Please let us know if any other changes are >> necessary. >> >> The counter increments only when a valid frame per [IEEE802154] >> is received by the node from its parent. >> >> >> Best regards, >> >> RFC Editor/jm >> >> >> 7) <!-- [rfced] We are having difficulty parsing this passage. >>> Specifically, may the first sentence be rephrased as follows? >>> And, in the later sentence, should "absolved" be "alleviated"? >>> >>> Current: >>> The 6P traffic overhead using a larger value of MAX_NUM_CELLS could >>> be reduced as well... The latency caused by slight changes of traffic >>> load can be absolved by the additional scheduled cells. >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> By using a larger value of MAX_NUM_CELLS, the 6P traffic overhead >>> could >>> be reduced as well... The latency caused by slight changes of traffic >>> load can be alleviated by the additional scheduled cells. >>> --> >>> >>> *TC: The suggested sentence read good.* >> >> * OLD:* >> >> * The 6P traffic overhead using a larger value of MAX_NUM_CELLS could * >> >> * be reduced as well... The latency caused by slight changes of >> traffic * >> >> * load can be absolved by the additional scheduled cells.* >> >> >> * NEW:* >> >> * By using a larger value of MAX_NUM_CELLS, the 6P traffic overhead >> could * >> >> * be reduced as well... The latency caused by slight changes of >> traffic * >> >> * load can be alleviated by the additional scheduled cells. * >> >> >> >>> >>> 8) <!-- [rfced] FYI, we have applied superscript formatting to the >>> following. >>> Please let us know if you would like to add a space on either side of the >>> operators to improve readability. >>> >>> Current: >>> ((2^MAXBE)-1)*MAXRETRIES*SLOTFRAME_LENGTH >>> >>> Perhaps: >>> ((2^MAXBE) - 1) * MAXRETRIES * SLOTFRAME_LENGTH >>> --> >>> >>> *TC: We prefer add a space on * *either side ** of the operators to >> improve readability.* >> >> >> *OLD:* >> >> * ((2^MAXBE)-1)*MAXRETRIES*SLOTFRAME_LENGTH * >> >> >> *NEW: * >> >> * ((2^MAXBE) - 1) * MAXRETRIES * SLOTFRAME_LENGTH * >> >> >>> 9) <!--[rfced] FYI, we have updated this reference as follows, as the DOI >>> provided in the original is not functional, and it seems your intention >>> was to refer to IEEE 802.15.4-2015. (Please note that it was >>> "Superseded by IEEE Std 802.15.4-2020" as detailed at the provided URL.) >>> >>> Please review and let us know any updates; we will follow up >>> on this topic as this reference appears in several documents >>> in this cluster (C310). >>> >>> Original: >>> [IEEE802154] >>> IEEE standard for Information Technology, "IEEE Std >>> >>> 802.15.4 Standard for Low-Rate Wireless Personal Area >>> >>> Networks (WPANs)", DOI 10.1109/IEEE P802.15.4-REVd/D01, >>> <http://ieeexplore.ieee.org/document/7460875/>. >>> >>> Current: >>> [IEEE802154] >>> IEEE, "IEEE Standard for Low-Rate Wireless Networks", IEEE >>> Standard 802.15.4-2015, DOI 10.1109/IEEESTD.2016.7460875, >>> April 2016, >>> <https://ieeexplore.ieee.org/document/7460875>. >>> --> >>> >>> *TC: Thanks for updating the link. We prefer to use the IEEE >> 802.15.4-2015, which are referred during developing MSF.* >> >>> >>> 10) <!-- [rfced] In the appendix, the term "mote" is used instead of >>> "node". >>> Is this intentional? >>> --> >>> >>> *TC: No. Please replace "mote" by "node".* >> >> *OLD: * >> >> *String s is replaced by the mote EUI-64 address. The characters of the >> string, c0 through c7, are the eight bytes of the EUI-64 address.* >> >> *NEW: * >> >> *String s is replaced by the node EUI-64 address. The characters of the >> string, c0 through c7, are the eight bytes of the EUI-64 address.* >> >> >> *OLD: * >> >> *The appropriate values of l_bit and r_bit could vary depending on the >> set of motes' EUI-64 address.* >> >> *NEW: * >> >> *The appropriate values of l_bit and r_bit could vary depending on the >> set of nodes' EUI-64 address.* >> >> >>> 11) <!-- [rfced] FYI, we have updated the formatting of the Contributors >>> section to use <contact/> elements: >>> >>> Original: >>> * Beshr Al Nahas (Chalmers University, beshr@chalmers.se) >>> * Olaf Landsiedel (Chalmers University, olafl@chalmers.se) >>> * Yasuyuki Tanaka (Inria-Paris, yasuyuki.tanaka@inria.fr) >>> >>> Current: >>> Beshr Al Nahas >>> Chalmers University >>> >>> Email: beshr@chalmers.se >>> >>> >>> Olaf Landsiedel >>> Chalmers University >>> >>> Email: olafl@chalmers.se >>> >>> >>> Yasuyuki Tanaka >>> Inria-Paris >>> >>> Email: yasuyuki.tanaka@inria.fr >>> --> >>> >>> *TC: This looks good! 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- [C310] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9033 <draft-ietf-6tisch-m… rfc-editor
- Re: [C310] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9033 <draft-ietf-6tis… rfc-editor
- Re: [C310] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9033 <draft-ietf-6tis… Mališa Vučinić
- Re: [C310] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9033 <draft-ietf-6tis… Prof. Diego Dujovne
- Re: [C310] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9033 <draft-ietf-6tis… Xavi Vilajosana Guillen
- Re: [C310] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9033 <draft-ietf-6tis… Tengfei Chang
- Re: [C310] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9033 <draft-ietf-6tis… Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
- Re: [C310] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9033 <draft-ietf-6tis… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [C310] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9033 <draft-ietf-6tis… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [C310] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9033 <draft-ietf-6tis… Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
- Re: [C310] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9033 <draft-ietf-6tis… Tengfei Chang
- [C310] [AD - Erik Kline] Re: AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 903… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [C310] [AD - Erik Kline] Re: AUTH48 [JM]: RFC… Prof. Diego Dujovne
- Re: [C310] [AD - Erik Kline] Re: AUTH48 [JM]: RFC… Mališa Vučinić
- Re: [C310] [AD - Erik Kline] Re: AUTH48 [JM]: RFC… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [C310] [AD - Erik Kline] Re: AUTH48 [JM]: RFC… Prof. Diego Dujovne
- Re: [C310] [AD - Erik Kline] Re: AUTH48 [JM]: RFC… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [C310] [AD - Erik Kline] Re: AUTH48 [JM]: RFC… Tengfei Chang
- Re: [C310] [AD - Erik Kline] Re: AUTH48 [JM]: RFC… Xavi Vilajosana Guillen
- Re: [C310] [AD - Erik Kline] Re: AUTH48 [JM]: RFC… Simon Duquennoy
- Re: [C310] [AD - Erik Kline] Re: AUTH48 [JM]: RFC… Erik Kline
- Re: [C310] [AD - Erik Kline] Re: AUTH48 [JM]: RFC… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [C310] [AD - Erik Kline] Re: AUTH48 [JM]: RFC… Jean Mahoney