Re: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS)

Hi, Elwyn:
Your proposed change looks good to me. Thanks!

Regards!
-Qin
----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Elwyn Davies" <elwynd@googlemail.com>
To: "Qin Wu" <bill.wu@huawei.com>
Cc: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com>; <dime@ietf.org>; <draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr@tools.ietf.org>; "Glen Zorn" <glenzorn@gmail.com>; <housley@vigilsec.com>
Sent: Wednesday, February 22, 2012 9:24 PM
Subject: Re: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS)

> Hi.
> 
> That seems to improved things except:
> 
> s1, para 1: The 'itself' is still unclear as to what it refers to.  
> suggest s/itself/the same Mobile Access Gateway/.
> 
> s5.1, para 3: s/indicating Direct routing/indicating direct routing/
> 
> Regards,
> Elwyn
> 
> 
> 
> On 22/02/12 06:25, Qin Wu wrote:
>> Dan:
>>
>> We have fixed this part in the new version -10.
>>
>> Regards!
>> -Qin
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)"<dromasca@avaya.com>
>> To:<elwynd@googlemail.com>;<dime@ietf.org>;<draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr@tools.ietf.org>
>> Cc: "Glen Zorn"<glenzorn@gmail.com>; "Russ Housley ""<housley@vigilsec.com>
>> Sent: Sunday, February 19, 2012 5:01 PM
>> Subject: RE: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS)
>>
>>
>> Document editors,
>>
>> Do you have any problem with fixing the editorial nits brought up by
>> Elwyn within the note to the RFC Editor?
>>
>> Thanks and Regards,
>>
>> Dan
>>
>>
>>
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: The Master [mailto:elwynd@googlemail.com]
>>> Sent: Friday, February 17, 2012 11:34 AM
>>> To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
>>> Cc: Glen Zorn; Russ Housley "; dime@ietf.org; draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-
>>> lr@tools.ietf.org
>>> Subject: Re: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-
>>> pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS)
>>>
>>> Hi, Russ, Dan and authors,
>>>
>>> The latest version (v09) addresses the minor issues that I raised on
>>> v07
>>> as discussed with Qin.  However I observe that the editorial nits
>>> *didn't* get fixed, especially the comment about 'itself' in s1 which
>> I
>>> ought to be improved.
>>>
>>> Regards,
>>> Elwyn
>>>
>>> On Tue, 2012-02-14 at 08:51 +0100, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote:
>>>> Hi Glen,
>>>>
>>>> The change control of I-Ds submitted to the IESG belongs to the
>>>> shepherding AD. I prefer to hold submissions during the week prior
>> to
>>> a
>>>> telechat so that all ADs review the same version, and editors do all
>>>> changes at once after the telechat. Now that you submitted, it's
>>> done,
>>>> but in case other ADs enter DISCUSSes that require changes you will
>>> need
>>>> to issue yet another version.
>>>>
>>>> Russ, Elwyn, can you please check if you concerns were answered?
>>>>
>>>> Thanks and Regards,
>>>>
>>>> Dan
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>>> From: Glen Zorn [mailto:glenzorn@gmail.com]
>>>>> Sent: Tuesday, February 14, 2012 7:14 AM
>>>>> To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
>>>>> Cc: dime@ietf.org; "@tools.ietf.org>"; Russ Housley"
>>>>> Subject: Re: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-
>>>>> pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS)
>>>>>
>>>>> On 2/14/2012 7:16 AM, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote:
>>>>>> Document editors,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Can you please check what is the status of these comments?
>> Please
>>> do
>>>>> not make a change now, even if all comments were accepted, but
>> wait
>>>>> until after the telechat to issue a revised version.
>>>>> Your message and Russ's DISCUSS seem to be contradictory.  In any
>>>> case,
>>>>> a revision was posted last night, long before the DISCUSS.
>>>>>
>>>>>> Thanks and Regards,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Dan
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>>>> From: iesg-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:iesg-bounces@ietf.org] On
>>> Behalf
>>>>> Of Russ Housley
>>>>>> Sent: Tuesday, February 14, 2012 12:55 AM
>>>>>> To: The IESG
>>>>>> Cc: draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr@tools.ietf.org;
>>> elwynd@dial.pipex.com;
>>>>> dime-chairs@tools.ietf.org
>>>>>> Subject: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09:
>>>> (with
>>>>> DISCUSS)
>>>>>> Russ Housley has entered the following ballot position for
>>>>>> draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09: Discuss
>>>>>>
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>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>> ---------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>>> -
>>>>>> DISCUSS:
>>>>>>
>> ---------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>>> -
>>>>>>
>>>>>>    The authors have agreed to make some changes based on the Gen-
>>> ART
>>>>>>    Review by Elwyn Davies on 2-Feb-2012.  The changes have not
>>> been
>>>>>>    posted yet.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
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