Re: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS)

[Qin Wu <[e-mail]>]

Dan:

We have fixed this part in the new version -10.

Regards!
-Qin
----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <[e-mail]>
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Cc: "Glen Zorn" <[e-mail]>; "Russ Housley "" <[e-mail]>
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Subject: RE: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS)


Document editors, 

Do you have any problem with fixing the editorial nits brought up by
Elwyn within the note to the RFC Editor? 

Thanks and Regards,

Dan



> -----Original Message-----
> From: The Master [mailto:[e-mail]]
> Sent: Friday, February 17, 2012 11:34 AM
> To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
> Cc: Glen Zorn; Russ Housley "; [e-mail]; draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-
> [e-mail]
> Subject: Re: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-
> pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS)
> 
> Hi, Russ, Dan and authors,
> 
> The latest version (v09) addresses the minor issues that I raised on
> v07
> as discussed with Qin.  However I observe that the editorial nits
> *didn't* get fixed, especially the comment about 'itself' in s1 which
I
> ought to be improved.
> 
> Regards,
> Elwyn
> 
> On Tue, 2012-02-14 at 08:51 +0100, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote:
> > Hi Glen,
> >
> > The change control of I-Ds submitted to the IESG belongs to the
> > shepherding AD. I prefer to hold submissions during the week prior
to
> a
> > telechat so that all ADs review the same version, and editors do all
> > changes at once after the telechat. Now that you submitted, it's
> done,
> > but in case other ADs enter DISCUSSes that require changes you will
> need
> > to issue yet another version.
> >
> > Russ, Elwyn, can you please check if you concerns were answered?
> >
> > Thanks and Regards,
> >
> > Dan
> >
> >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Glen Zorn [mailto:[e-mail]]
> > > Sent: Tuesday, February 14, 2012 7:14 AM
> > > To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
> > > Cc: [e-mail]; "@tools.ietf.org>"; Russ Housley "
> > > Subject: Re: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-
> > > pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS)
> > >
> > > On 2/14/2012 7:16 AM, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote:
> > > > Document editors,
> > > >
> > > > Can you please check what is the status of these comments?
Please
> do
> > > not make a change now, even if all comments were accepted, but
wait
> > > until after the telechat to issue a revised version.
> > > >
> > >
> > > Your message and Russ's DISCUSS seem to be contradictory.  In any
> > case,
> > > a revision was posted last night, long before the DISCUSS.
> > >
> > > > Thanks and Regards,
> > > >
> > > > Dan
> > > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > From: [e-mail] [mailto:[e-mail]] On
> Behalf
> > > Of Russ Housley
> > > > Sent: Tuesday, February 14, 2012 12:55 AM
> > > > To: The IESG
> > > > Cc: [e-mail];
> [e-mail];
> > > [e-mail]
> > > > Subject: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09:
> > (with
> > > DISCUSS)
> > > >
> > > > Russ Housley has entered the following ballot position for
> > > > draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09: Discuss
> > > >
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> > > > Please refer to http://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-
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> >
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> > > -
> > > > DISCUSS:
> > > >
> >
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> > > -
> > > >
> > > >
> > > >   The authors have agreed to make some changes based on the Gen-
> ART
> > > >   Review by Elwyn Davies on 2-Feb-2012.  The changes have not
> been
> > > >   posted yet.
> > > >
> > > >
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