Re: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS)

On 22/02/12 14:34, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote:
> I have entered these in the RFC Editor note.
>
> Thanks and Regards,
>
> Dan

Fine.

Regards,
Elwyn
>
>
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Elwyn Davies [mailto:elwynd@googlemail.com]
>> Sent: Wednesday, February 22, 2012 3:24 PM
>> To: Qin Wu
>> Cc: Romascanu, Dan (Dan); dime@ietf.org; draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-
>> lr@tools.ietf.org; Glen Zorn;
>> Subject: Re: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-
>> pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS)
>>
>> Hi.
>>
>> That seems to improved things except:
>>
>> s1, para 1: The 'itself' is still unclear as to what it refers to.
>> suggest s/itself/the same Mobile Access Gateway/.
>>
>> s5.1, para 3: s/indicating Direct routing/indicating direct routing/
>>
>> Regards,
>> Elwyn
>>
>>
>>
>> On 22/02/12 06:25, Qin Wu wrote:
>>> Dan:
>>>
>>> We have fixed this part in the new version -10.
>>>
>>> Regards!
>>> -Qin
>>> ----- Original Message -----
>>> From: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)"<dromasca@avaya.com>
>>> To:<elwynd@googlemail.com>;<dime@ietf.org>;<draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-
>> lr@tools.ietf.org>
>>> Cc: "Glen Zorn"<glenzorn@gmail.com>; "Russ Housley
>> ""<housley@vigilsec.com>
>>> Sent: Sunday, February 19, 2012 5:01 PM
>>> Subject: RE: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-
>> pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS)
>>>
>>> Document editors,
>>>
>>> Do you have any problem with fixing the editorial nits brought up by
>>> Elwyn within the note to the RFC Editor?
>>>
>>> Thanks and Regards,
>>>
>>> Dan
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>> From: The Master [mailto:elwynd@googlemail.com]
>>>> Sent: Friday, February 17, 2012 11:34 AM
>>>> To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
>>>> Cc: Glen Zorn; Russ Housley "; dime@ietf.org;
> draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-
>>>> lr@tools.ietf.org
>>>> Subject: Re: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-
>>>> pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS)
>>>>
>>>> Hi, Russ, Dan and authors,
>>>>
>>>> The latest version (v09) addresses the minor issues that I raised
> on
>>>> v07
>>>> as discussed with Qin.  However I observe that the editorial nits
>>>> *didn't* get fixed, especially the comment about 'itself' in s1
>> which
>>> I
>>>> ought to be improved.
>>>>
>>>> Regards,
>>>> Elwyn
>>>>
>>>> On Tue, 2012-02-14 at 08:51 +0100, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote:
>>>>> Hi Glen,
>>>>>
>>>>> The change control of I-Ds submitted to the IESG belongs to the
>>>>> shepherding AD. I prefer to hold submissions during the week prior
>>> to
>>>> a
>>>>> telechat so that all ADs review the same version, and editors do
>> all
>>>>> changes at once after the telechat. Now that you submitted, it's
>>>> done,
>>>>> but in case other ADs enter DISCUSSes that require changes you
> will
>>>> need
>>>>> to issue yet another version.
>>>>>
>>>>> Russ, Elwyn, can you please check if you concerns were answered?
>>>>>
>>>>> Thanks and Regards,
>>>>>
>>>>> Dan
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>>>> From: Glen Zorn [mailto:glenzorn@gmail.com]
>>>>>> Sent: Tuesday, February 14, 2012 7:14 AM
>>>>>> To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
>>>>>> Cc: dime@ietf.org; "@tools.ietf.org>"; Russ Housley"
>>>>>> Subject: Re: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on
> draft-ietf-dime-
>>>>>> pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS)
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On 2/14/2012 7:16 AM, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote:
>>>>>>> Document editors,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Can you please check what is the status of these comments?
>>> Please
>>>> do
>>>>>> not make a change now, even if all comments were accepted, but
>>> wait
>>>>>> until after the telechat to issue a revised version.
>>>>>> Your message and Russ's DISCUSS seem to be contradictory.  In any
>>>>> case,
>>>>>> a revision was posted last night, long before the DISCUSS.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thanks and Regards,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Dan
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>>>>> From: iesg-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:iesg-bounces@ietf.org] On
>>>> Behalf
>>>>>> Of Russ Housley
>>>>>>> Sent: Tuesday, February 14, 2012 12:55 AM
>>>>>>> To: The IESG
>>>>>>> Cc: draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr@tools.ietf.org;
>>>> elwynd@dial.pipex.com;
>>>>>> dime-chairs@tools.ietf.org
>>>>>>> Subject: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09:
>>>>> (with
>>>>>> DISCUSS)
>>>>>>> Russ Housley has entered the following ballot position for
>>>>>>> draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09: Discuss
>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
> ---------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>>>> -
>>>>>>> DISCUSS:
>>>>>>>
> ---------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>>>> -
>>>>>>>     The authors have agreed to make some changes based on the
> Gen-
>>>> ART
>>>>>>>     Review by Elwyn Davies on 2-Feb-2012.  The changes have not
>>>> been
>>>>>>>     posted yet.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
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