Re: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS)

[Qin Wu <[e-mail]>]

Hi,Elwyn:
Sorry for late. I have just fixed the editorial nits we discussed in the version -10.
The diff is:
http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-10

Sorry for forgetting to incorporate this part of changes.

Regards!
-Qin Wu
----- Original Message ----- 
From: "The Master" <[e-mail]>
To: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <[e-mail]>
Cc: "Glen Zorn" <[e-mail]>; "Russ Housley "" <[e-mail]>; <[e-mail]>; <[e-mail]>
Sent: Friday, February 17, 2012 5:33 PM
Subject: Re: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS)


> Hi, Russ, Dan and authors,
> 
> The latest version (v09) addresses the minor issues that I raised on v07
> as discussed with Qin.  However I observe that the editorial nits
> *didn't* get fixed, especially the comment about 'itself' in s1 which I
> ought to be improved.
> 
> Regards,
> Elwyn
> 
> On Tue, 2012-02-14 at 08:51 +0100, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote:
>> Hi Glen,
>> 
>> The change control of I-Ds submitted to the IESG belongs to the
>> shepherding AD. I prefer to hold submissions during the week prior to a
>> telechat so that all ADs review the same version, and editors do all
>> changes at once after the telechat. Now that you submitted, it's done,
>> but in case other ADs enter DISCUSSes that require changes you will need
>> to issue yet another version. 
>> 
>> Russ, Elwyn, can you please check if you concerns were answered? 
>> 
>> Thanks and Regards,
>> 
>> Dan
>> 
>> 
>> > -----Original Message-----
>> > From: Glen Zorn [mailto:[e-mail]]
>> > Sent: Tuesday, February 14, 2012 7:14 AM
>> > To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
>> > Cc: [e-mail]; "@tools.ietf.org>"; Russ Housley "
>> > Subject: Re: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-
>> > pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS)
>> > 
>> > On 2/14/2012 7:16 AM, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote:
>> > > Document editors,
>> > >
>> > > Can you please check what is the status of these comments? Please do
>> > not make a change now, even if all comments were accepted, but wait
>> > until after the telechat to issue a revised version.
>> > >
>> > 
>> > Your message and Russ's DISCUSS seem to be contradictory.  In any
>> case,
>> > a revision was posted last night, long before the DISCUSS.
>> > 
>> > > Thanks and Regards,
>> > >
>> > > Dan
>> > >
>> > >
>> > >
>> > >
>> > > -----Original Message-----
>> > > From: [e-mail] [mailto:[e-mail]] On Behalf
>> > Of Russ Housley
>> > > Sent: Tuesday, February 14, 2012 12:55 AM
>> > > To: The IESG
>> > > Cc: [e-mail]; [e-mail];
>> > [e-mail]
>> > > Subject: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09:
>> (with
>> > DISCUSS)
>> > >
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>> ---------------------------------------------------------------------
>> > -
>> > > DISCUSS:
>> > >
>> ---------------------------------------------------------------------
>> > -
>> > >
>> > >
>> > >   The authors have agreed to make some changes based on the Gen-ART
>> > >   Review by Elwyn Davies on 2-Feb-2012.  The changes have not been
>> > >   posted yet.
>> > >
>> > >
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