Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes-07.txt

That's OK, or you could do a super quick rev to fix that, as otherwise 
someone else will comment about it.

--Randall

On 15 Aug 2023, at 10:13, Brian Rosen wrote:

> I don’t have the LoST-Sync changes in.  I think we’re going to 
> have to do a larger fix to LoST Sync (signatures don’t work as 
> specified), and we’ll do them there.
>
> In the first paragraph of Section 3, the text talks about 3 entry 
> points.  It expressly says “one” and “three” but refers to the 
> second as “Another”.  The change suggested by Victor makes the 
> numbering for “two” explicit.  We can just go with what is there, 
> or if there is another version to deal with comments we get in the 
> approval process, I’ll fix it then.
>
> Brian
>
>
>> On Aug 15, 2023, at 12:48 PM, Randall Gellens 
>> <rg+ietf@coretechnologyconsulting.com> wrote:
>>
>> Brian,
>>
>> Are the changes you propose here reflected in -07?
>>
>> Can you remind me what "entry point numbering" means?
>>
>> Roger: You are listed as the shepherd. Are you able and willing to do 
>> so or should I ask Dwight?
>>
>> --Randall
>>
>> Forwarded message:
>>
>>> From: Brian Rosen <br@brianrosen.net>
>>> To: ECRIT <ecrit@ietf.org>
>>> Subject: Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: 
>>> draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes-07.txt
>>> Date: Mon, 22 May 2023 15:14:17 -0400
>>>
>>> I updated planned-changes to fix the typos reported by Victor.  I 
>>> managed to undo one of his requested edits (entry point numbering), 
>>> which I will fix soon.  If I missed anything else, please remind me.
>>>
>>> I propose to add another part to this document, which would be to 
>>> add “AsOf” and “Expires” metadata to a LoST sync 
>>> transaction, so a Forest Guide can do the same thing with planned 
>>> changes as a LoST server could.
>>>
>>> Brian
>>>
>>>
>>>> On May 22, 2023, at 2:56 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>>>> directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Emergency 
>>>> Context
>>>> Resolution with Internet Technologies (ECRIT) WG of the IETF.
>>>>
>>>>  Title           : Validation of Locations Around a Planned Change
>>>>  Author          : Brian Rosen
>>>>  Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes-07.txt
>>>>  Pages           : 21
>>>>  Date            : 2023-05-22
>>>>
>>>> Abstract:
>>>>  This document defines an extension to the Location to Service
>>>>  Translation (LoST) protocol (RFC5222) that allows a LoSR server ti
>>>>  notify a client of planned changes to the data.  This extension is
>>>>  only useful with the validation function of LoST.  It is 
>>>> beneficial
>>>>  for LoST validation clients to be aware of planned changes, as
>>>>  records that previously were valid may become invalid at a known
>>>>  future date, and new locations may become valid after the date.  
>>>> This
>>>>  extension adds an element to the <findService> request: a date 
>>>> that
>>>>  allows the LoST client to request that the server perform 
>>>> validation
>>>>  as of the date specified.  It adds an optional Time-To-Live 
>>>> element
>>>>  to the response, which informs clients of the current expected
>>>>  lifetime of a validation.  It also adds a separate interface to 
>>>> the
>>>>  LoST server that allows a client to poll for planned changes.
>>>>  Additionally, this document provides a conventional XML schema for
>>>>  LoST, as a backwards compatible alternative to the RelaxNG schema 
>>>> in
>>>>  RFC5222.
>>>>
>>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes/
>>>>
>>>> There is also an HTML version available at:
>>>> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes-07.html
>>>>
>>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>>> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes-07
>>>>
>>>> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at 
>>>> rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
>>>>
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