Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes-07.txt
Randall Gellens <rg+ietf@coretechnologyconsulting.com> Tue, 15 August 2023 18:55 UTC
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Dwight has agreed to shepherd the draft, but won't be able to start until the end of the month. --Randall On 15 Aug 2023, at 10:24, Roger Marshall wrote: > Please ask Dwight to shepherd. > > Thanks. > > -roger. > > -----Original Message----- > From: Brian Rosen <br@brianrosen.net> > Sent: Tuesday, August 15, 2023 10:13 AM > To: Randall Gellens <rg+ietf@coretechnologyconsulting.com> > Cc: Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>; ECRIT <ecrit@ietf.org>; > Roger Marshall <Roger.Marshall@comtech.com> > Subject: Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: > draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes-07.txt > > > WARNING: External Email: Exercise Caution > > I don't have the LoST-Sync changes in. I think we're going to have to > do a larger fix to LoST Sync (signatures don't work as specified), and > we'll do them there. > > In the first paragraph of Section 3, the text talks about 3 entry > points. It expressly says "one" and "three" but refers to the second > as "Another". The change suggested by Victor makes the numbering for > "two" explicit. We can just go with what is there, or if there is > another version to deal with comments we get in the approval process, > I'll fix it then. > > Brian > > >> On Aug 15, 2023, at 12:48 PM, Randall Gellens >> <rg+ietf@coretechnologyconsulting.com> wrote: >> >> Brian, >> >> Are the changes you propose here reflected in -07? >> >> Can you remind me what "entry point numbering" means? >> >> Roger: You are listed as the shepherd. Are you able and willing to do >> so or should I ask Dwight? >> >> --Randall >> >> Forwarded message: >> >>> From: Brian Rosen <br@brianrosen.net> >>> To: ECRIT <ecrit@ietf.org> >>> Subject: Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: >>> draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes-07.txt >>> Date: Mon, 22 May 2023 15:14:17 -0400 >>> >>> I updated planned-changes to fix the typos reported by Victor. I >>> managed to undo one of his requested edits (entry point numbering), >>> which I will fix soon. If I missed anything else, please remind me. >>> >>> I propose to add another part to this document, which would be to >>> add "AsOf" and "Expires" metadata to a LoST sync transaction, so a >>> Forest Guide can do the same thing with planned changes as a LoST >>> server could. >>> >>> Brian >>> >>> >>>> On May 22, 2023, at 2:56 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote: >>>> >>>> >>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts >>>> directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Emergency >>>> Context Resolution with Internet Technologies (ECRIT) WG of the >>>> IETF. >>>> >>>> Title : Validation of Locations Around a Planned Change >>>> Author : Brian Rosen >>>> Filename : draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes-07.txt >>>> Pages : 21 >>>> Date : 2023-05-22 >>>> >>>> Abstract: >>>> This document defines an extension to the Location to Service >>>> Translation (LoST) protocol (RFC5222) that allows a LoSR server ti >>>> notify a client of planned changes to the data. This extension is >>>> only useful with the validation function of LoST. It is beneficial >>>> for LoST validation clients to be aware of planned changes, as >>>> records that previously were valid may become invalid at a known >>>> future date, and new locations may become valid after the date. >>>> This extension adds an element to the <findService> request: a >>>> date >>>> that allows the LoST client to request that the server perform >>>> validation as of the date specified. It adds an optional >>>> Time-To-Live element to the response, which informs clients of the >>>> current expected lifetime of a validation. It also adds a >>>> separate >>>> interface to the LoST server that allows a client to poll for >>>> planned changes. >>>> Additionally, this document provides a conventional XML schema for >>>> LoST, as a backwards compatible alternative to the RelaxNG schema >>>> in >>>> RFC5222. >>>> >>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is: >>>> https://gcc02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fda >>>> tatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes%2F& >>>> data=05%7C01%7CRoger.Marshall%40comtech.com%7C49e1d4d3486e41d5321608 >>>> db9db2f4c7%7Ca9a26e696ae040c1bd801ca6cc677828%7C0%7C0%7C638277164177 >>>> 684769%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiL >>>> CJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=Kx7LcCRXQufiu6v1 >>>> G%2FeVN87rAPdj%2FFUUgVam9hr%2Bd%2F8%3D&reserved=0 >>>> >>>> There is also an HTML version available at: >>>> https://gcc02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fww >>>> w.ietf.org%2Farchive%2Fid%2Fdraft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes-07 >>>> .html&data=05%7C01%7CRoger.Marshall%40comtech.com%7C49e1d4d3486e41d5 >>>> 321608db9db2f4c7%7Ca9a26e696ae040c1bd801ca6cc677828%7C0%7C0%7C638277 >>>> 164177684769%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2l >>>> uMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=wSsOeg3r3m >>>> kzmypQx4B44XDEeXsJlkmqpwxVu%2BJaUuA%3D&reserved=0 >>>> >>>> A diff from the previous version is available at: >>>> https://gcc02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fau >>>> thor-tools.ietf.org%2Fiddiff%3Furl2%3Ddraft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned- >>>> changes-07&data=05%7C01%7CRoger.Marshall%40comtech.com%7C49e1d4d3486 >>>> e41d5321608db9db2f4c7%7Ca9a26e696ae040c1bd801ca6cc677828%7C0%7C0%7C6 >>>> 38277164177684769%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIj >>>> oiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=X%2BT >>>> 6%2B1tH3oW3bcsjVcMHRvmrYT0pCE4rIt5aOfJJXDQ%3D&reserved=0 >>>> >>>> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at >>>> rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts >>>> >>>> >>>> _______________________________________________ >>>> I-D-Announce mailing list >>>> I-D-Announce@ietf.org >>>> https://gcc02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fww >>>> w.ietf.org%2Fmailman%2Flistinfo%2Fi-d-announce&data=05%7C01%7CRoger. >>>> Marshall%40comtech.com%7C49e1d4d3486e41d5321608db9db2f4c7%7Ca9a26e69 >>>> 6ae040c1bd801ca6cc677828%7C0%7C0%7C638277164177684769%7CUnknown%7CTW >>>> FpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVC >>>> I6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=utfwh7mlcf0DgUAE7uRpDpqmSgUosU2rZbqZD >>>> P6Ve%2FQ%3D&reserved=0 Internet-Draft directories: >>>> https://gcc02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww >>>> .ietf.org%2Fshadow.html&data=05%7C01%7CRoger.Marshall%40comtech.com% >>>> 7C49e1d4d3486e41d5321608db9db2f4c7%7Ca9a26e696ae040c1bd801ca6cc67782 >>>> 8%7C0%7C0%7C638277164177684769%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wL >>>> jAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7 >>>> C&sdata=mpaay%2FiU4prtBAto4J4bbV0kdULr9BJ3vPOOCIbSuvw%3D&reserved=0 >>>> or >>>> https://gcc02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=ftp%3A%2F%2Fftp. >>>> ietf.org%2Fietf%2F1shadow-sites.txt&data=05%7C01%7CRoger.Marshall%40 >>>> comtech.com%7C49e1d4d3486e41d5321608db9db2f4c7%7Ca9a26e696ae040c1bd8 >>>> 01ca6cc677828%7C0%7C0%7C638277164177684769%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8e >>>> yJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C >>>> 3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=DfYq6DWIkYs6hT0jhnF60WrL9iM7MXWgOmiplQI8YWg%3D&r >>>> eserved=0 >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Ecrit mailing list >>> Ecrit@ietf.org >>> https://gcc02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww >>> .ietf.org%2Fmailman%2Flistinfo%2Fecrit&data=05%7C01%7CRoger.Marshall% >>> 40comtech.com%7C49e1d4d3486e41d5321608db9db2f4c7%7Ca9a26e696ae040c1bd >>> 801ca6cc677828%7C0%7C0%7C638277164177684769%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8e >>> yJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3 >>> 000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=BL7XvskfYlSIda3q3jXHUyzPXHrCXfPwoBFrpU7Yzjs%3D&res >>> erved=0
- [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned… internet-drafts
- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-pla… Brian Rosen
- [Ecrit] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-pl… Randall Gellens
- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-pla… Brian Rosen
- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-pla… Roger Marshall
- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-pla… Randall Gellens
- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-pla… Randall Gellens
- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-pla… Roger Marshall
- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-pla… Brian Rosen
- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-pla… Randall Gellens
- Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-pla… Brian Rosen