Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes-07.txt

[Brian Rosen <[e-mail]>]

Done

> On Aug 15, 2023, at 6:55 PM, Randall Gellens <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> Would you mind doing a rev to fix the numbering thing? It sounds like it's just a one-word edit, so should be super easy/fast to rev, and will avoid getting comments on it.
> 
> --Randall
> 
> On 15 Aug 2023, at 13:25, Brian Rosen wrote:
> 
> Can we start WGLC?
> 
>> On Aug 15, 2023, at 3:46 PM, Roger Marshall <[e-mail]> wrote:
>> 
>> Great! Thank you Randall.
>> 
>> -roger.
>> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Randall Gellens <[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>> 
>> Sent: Tuesday, August 15, 2023 11:56 AM
>> To: Roger Marshall <[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>>
>> Cc: Brian Rosen <[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>>; Murray S. Kucherawy <[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>>; ECRIT <[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>>
>> Subject: Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes-07.txt
>> 
>> 
>> WARNING: External Email: Exercise Caution
>> 
>> Dwight has agreed to shepherd the draft, but won't be able to start until the end of the month.
>> 
>> --Randall
>> 
>> On 15 Aug 2023, at 10:24, Roger Marshall wrote:
>> 
>>> Please ask Dwight to shepherd.
>>> 
>>> Thanks.
>>> 
>>> -roger.
>>> 
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: Brian Rosen <[e-mail]>
>>> Sent: Tuesday, August 15, 2023 10:13 AM
>>> To: Randall Gellens <[e-mail]>
>>> Cc: Murray S. Kucherawy <[e-mail]>; ECRIT <[e-mail]>; 
>>> Roger Marshall <[e-mail]>
>>> Subject: Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action:
>>> draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes-07.txt
>>> 
>>> 
>>> WARNING: External Email: Exercise Caution
>>> 
>>> I don't have the LoST-Sync changes in.  I think we're going to have to 
>>> do a larger fix to LoST Sync (signatures don't work as specified), and 
>>> we'll do them there.
>>> 
>>> In the first paragraph of Section 3, the text talks about 3 entry 
>>> points.  It expressly says "one" and "three" but refers to the second 
>>> as "Another".  The change suggested by Victor makes the numbering for 
>>> "two" explicit.  We can just go with what is there, or if there is 
>>> another version to deal with comments we get in the approval process, 
>>> I'll fix it then.
>>> 
>>> Brian
>>> 
>>> 
>>>> On Aug 15, 2023, at 12:48 PM, Randall Gellens 
>>>> <[e-mail]> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Brian,
>>>> 
>>>> Are the changes you propose here reflected in -07?
>>>> 
>>>> Can you remind me what "entry point numbering" means?
>>>> 
>>>> Roger: You are listed as the shepherd. Are you able and willing to do 
>>>> so or should I ask Dwight?
>>>> 
>>>> --Randall
>>>> 
>>>> Forwarded message:
>>>> 
>>>>> From: Brian Rosen <[e-mail]>
>>>>> To: ECRIT <[e-mail]>
>>>>> Subject: Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action:
>>>>> draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes-07.txt
>>>>> Date: Mon, 22 May 2023 15:14:17 -0400
>>>>> 
>>>>> I updated planned-changes to fix the typos reported by Victor.  I 
>>>>> managed to undo one of his requested edits (entry point numbering), 
>>>>> which I will fix soon.  If I missed anything else, please remind me.
>>>>> 
>>>>> I propose to add another part to this document, which would be to 
>>>>> add "AsOf" and "Expires" metadata to a LoST sync transaction, so a 
>>>>> Forest Guide can do the same thing with planned changes as a LoST 
>>>>> server could.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Brian
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>>> On May 22, 2023, at 2:56 PM, [e-mail] wrote:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
>>>>>> directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Emergency 
>>>>>> Context Resolution with Internet Technologies (ECRIT) WG of the 
>>>>>> IETF.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Title           : Validation of Locations Around a Planned Change
>>>>>> Author          : Brian Rosen
>>>>>> Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-planned-changes-07.txt
>>>>>> Pages           : 21
>>>>>> Date            : 2023-05-22
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Abstract:
>>>>>> This document defines an extension to the Location to Service 
>>>>>> Translation (LoST) protocol (RFC5222) that allows a LoSR server ti 
>>>>>> notify a client of planned changes to the data.  This extension is 
>>>>>> only useful with the validation function of LoST.  It is beneficial 
>>>>>> for LoST validation clients to be aware of planned changes, as 
>>>>>> records that previously were valid may become invalid at a known 
>>>>>> future date, and new locations may become valid after the date.
>>>>>> This  extension adds an element to the <findService> request: a 
>>>>>> date that  allows the LoST client to request that the server 
>>>>>> perform validation  as of the date specified.  It adds an optional 
>>>>>> Time-To-Live element  to the response, which informs clients of the 
>>>>>> current expected  lifetime of a validation.  It also adds a 
>>>>>> separate interface to the  LoST server that allows a client to poll 
>>>>>> for planned changes.
>>>>>> Additionally, this document provides a conventional XML schema for 
>>>>>> LoST, as a backwards compatible alternative to the RelaxNG schema 
>>>>>> in RFC5222.
>>>>>> 
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