Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-pwe3-iccp-stp-04

Mingui Zhang <zhangmingui@huawei.com> Fri, 09 October 2015 02:44 UTC

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From: Mingui Zhang <zhangmingui@huawei.com>
To: "Andrew G. Malis" <agmalis@gmail.com>, Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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Hi Brian, Andy,

Thanks for the suggestion!
I will add that description.

Mingui

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Andrew G. Malis [mailto:agmalis@gmail.com]
> Sent: Thursday, October 01, 2015 8:35 AM
> To: Brian E Carpenter
> Cc: draft-ietf-pwe3-iccp-stp.all@ietf.org; General Area Review Team
> Subject: Re: Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-pwe3-iccp-stp-04
> 
> Brian,
> 
> Thanks, I'll ask the authors to add that.
> 
> Cheers,
> Andy
> 
> On Wed, Sep 30, 2015 at 8:12 PM, Brian E Carpenter <
> brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> > Andy,
> >
> > I think most people think of a spanning tree as being constructed over
> > a set of bridges, so I guess that in addition to the sentences you
> > quote, I would be happy to see a more conceptual description in the
> Introduction