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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt

Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Wed, 28 January 2009 06:34 UTC

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Hi,

> All I see after the Abstract is a section with RFC 2119 language.

yes, that is the section the comment referred to.

 > ... the RFC Editor
> will always position this where he thinks it appropriate in an RFC and 
> this has nothing to do with whether the document is ready for 
> publication. 

that was why my review said "ready for publication". The review later 
contains a minor comment in case the authors want to take it into 
account. I am fine either way when it comes to minor comments.

> PS In case there should be any doubt, I really do appreciate the work 
> done by the GenArt review team to improve the quality of our RFCs.

Thanks,

Gonzalo

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