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[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt

Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Tue, 27 January 2009 09:31 UTC

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From: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt
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Hi,

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.


Draft:  draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt
Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>
Review Date: 27 January 2009

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.


Comments:

The Terminology Section is not usually appended to the Abstract. It is 
usually placed after the Introduction as a regular section.


Thanks,

Gonzalo


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