Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt

Ross Callon <rcallon@juniper.net> Tue, 27 January 2009 20:19 UTC

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From: Ross Callon <rcallon@juniper.net>
To: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>
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I proposed to the authors to put in an RFC editor's note to cover your
comment. If all are fine with this, then we should be ready to put this
on an IESG telechat.

Thanks, Ross

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From: Gonzalo Camarillo [mailto:Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com] 
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Subject: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt

Hi,

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.


Draft:  draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt
Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>
Review Date: 27 January 2009

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.


Comments:

The Terminology Section is not usually appended to the Abstract. It is 
usually placed after the Introduction as a regular section.


Thanks,

Gonzalo


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