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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt

"Diego Caviglia" <diego.caviglia@ericsson.com> Mon, 02 February 2009 20:54 UTC

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To: Gonzalo Camarillo <gonzalo.camarillo@ericsson.com>, Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
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Hi Gonzalo,
           I'd like to thank you for your work here.


BR

Diego
 

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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Gonzalo Camarillo [mailto:Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com]
> Sent: mercoledì 28 gennaio 2009 7.32
> To: Adrian Farrel
> Cc: Ross Callon; gen-art@ietf.org; ccamp-chairs@tools.ietf.org; draft-
> ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs@tools.ietf.org
> Subject: Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt
> 
> Hi,
> 
> > All I see after the Abstract is a section with RFC 2119 language.
> 
> yes, that is the section the comment referred to.
> 
>  > ... the RFC Editor
> > will always position this where he thinks it appropriate in an RFC and
> > this has nothing to do with whether the document is ready for
> > publication.
> 
> that was why my review said "ready for publication". The review later
> contains a minor comment in case the authors want to take it into
> account. I am fine either way when it comes to minor comments.
> 
> > PS In case there should be any doubt, I really do appreciate the work
> > done by the GenArt review team to improve the quality of our RFCs.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Gonzalo

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