Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt

It seems pretty clear that the comment actually refers to the
"Conventions used in this document" section. 

Ross

-----Original Message-----
From: Adrian Farrel [mailto:adrian@olddog.co.uk] 
Sent: 27 January 2009 17:55
To: Ross Callon; Gonzalo Camarillo
Cc: gen-art@ietf.org; ccamp-chairs@tools.ietf.org;
draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs@tools.ietf.org
Subject: Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt

Sure. Whatever.

Actually I am completely baffled by this comment as the terminology
section 
in this I-D is Section 2. We are talking about the same I-D aren't we? 
draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt

All I see after the Abstract is a section with RFC 2119 language. Maybe
this 
should be toned differently for a requirements draft, but I find it
useful 
and helpful to use 2119 language in requirements documents. As to the 
placement of 2119 boilerplate we should observe that the RFC Editor will

always position this where he thinks it appropriate in an RFC and this
has 
nothing to do with whether the document is ready for publication.
Sometimes, 
it is true, this is immediately after the Introduction, and sometimes it
is 
immediately after the Abstract. See 
http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc5316.txt and 
http://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc5440.txt for examples of each.

Thanks,
Adrian

PS In case there should be any doubt, I really do appreciate the work
done 
by the GenArt review team to improve the quality of our RFCs.

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Ross Callon" <rcallon@juniper.net>
To: "Gonzalo Camarillo" <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>
Cc: <gen-art@ietf.org>; <ccamp-chairs@tools.ietf.org>; 
<draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs@tools.ietf.org>
Sent: Tuesday, January 27, 2009 8:17 PM
Subject: RE: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt

I proposed to the authors to put in an RFC editor's note to cover your
comment. If all are fine with this, then we should be ready to put this
on an IESG telechat.

Thanks, Ross

-----Original Message-----
From: Gonzalo Camarillo [mailto:Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com]
Sent: 27 January 2009 04:31
To: draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs@tools.ietf.org
Cc: Ross Callon; gen-art@ietf.org; ccamp-chairs@tools.ietf.org
Subject: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt

Hi,

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Draft:  draft-ietf-ccamp-pc-and-sc-reqs-06.txt
Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>
Review Date: 27 January 2009

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Comments:

The Terminology Section is not usually appended to the Abstract. It is
usually placed after the Introduction as a regular section.

Thanks,

Gonzalo

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