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[Json] Early AD review of draft-ietf-jsonbis-rfc7159bis-02

Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm> Mon, 08 August 2016 10:03 UTC

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Subject: [Json] Early AD review of draft-ietf-jsonbis-rfc7159bis-02
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Hi,
Here are my comments on the document, most of them are nits:

"Byte order mark" in Section 8.1 needs a definition, for example by including the Unicode codepoint value.

In Section 11: I think you meant to update references to point to this document, not an earlier RFC.

Appendix A needs to be checked that it is correct. I think at least a couple of things are out of date.

First mention of UTF-8, UTF-16 need normative references.




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