Re: [link-relations] NEW RELATION: collection

Hi Mike,

I think this draft is almost ready for uploading it to IETF repository.  
I'd like you made several changes/improvements - see below.

In introduction, please include general statement on what is link 
relations.  I propose "RFC 5988 [RFC5988] defined the way of indicating 
resources on the Web.  This document specifies two new reciprocal types 
of such relation..."

Do you need Section 2?  You don't use RFC 219 keywords in the document.

With respect to Security considerations.  I think you should just point 
to RFC 5988, which says everything you need; you new rel types don't add 
anything to security issues of RFC 5988.

Should your draft refer to those documents you pointed to before (I mean 
OpenSearch, and two media types definitions).  You may note in 
Introduction or create a separate Appendix that several known usages exist.

Thanks,
Mykyta Yevstifeyev

07.08.2011 5:09, mike amundsen wrote:
> I've posted a "pre-draft" version of the I-D here:
> http://amundsen.com/media-types/files/item-and-collection/
>
> I would appreciate any advice, pointers, suggestions on improving this
> before I post the first submission to the IETF.
>
> I am currently at a loss as to what to include for the Security
> Considerations section. I've posted some suggestions/questions within
> this draft; feel free to point me in the proper direction.
>
> As soon as I clean up this version, I'll post it to the tracker
> (another first for me<g>).
>
> Thanks in advance.
>
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> On Sat, Aug 6, 2011 at 09:58, Ed Summers<ehs@pobox.com>  wrote:
>> Hi Mike,
>>
>> +1 for your efforts on registering 'collection'. We have a need for a
>> <link rel='collection' ...>  that could be used in HTML at MPOW.
>>
>> //Ed
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