Re: [Netconf] WGLC on netconf-event-notifications-13

["Eric Voit (evoit)" <[e-mail]>]

Thanks Balazs.   Requested tweaks in Ch3 & Ch5 made.

Eric

> From Balázs Lengyel, October 5, 2018 8:17 AM
> 
> Hello,
> 
> I have reviewed the draft and I think it is ready to progress forward.
> 
> Some comments minor:
> 
> Generally I find the draft a bit too long and too detailed. Much of this can be
> derived from the yang language, subscribed-notifications and yang-push.
> Still I  can accept it; it is OK.
> 
> Ch 3)
> 
> s/is been received/has been received/
> Last paragraph) true, but to me this seems trivial. If you don't support
> something, don't advertise it. Still this does not harm anyone.
> 
> CH 5)
> 
> s/if the NETCONF session involved with the "establish-subscription"
> terminates,/ if the NETCONF session that carried the "establish-subscription"
> terminates/ s/RPC MUST be sent using same the NETCONF session/RPC MUST
> be sent using the same NETCONF session/
> 
> regards Balazs
> 
> On 10/5/2018 12:10 AM, Kent Watsen wrote:
> > This message starts a Last Call on draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-event-
> notifications-13 (a.k.a. "netconf-notif"):
> >
> >
> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-event-notificat
> > ions-13
> >
> > This, along with the restconf-notif Last Call, started in a separate
> > message, marks the last of the last calls on the yang push suite of
> > drafts. As explained before, given the size and number of documents,
> > the chairs decided to break the reviews up into pieces so as to get
> > focus on each in turn.  We chose to go top-down, starting with
> > yang-push and ending with the "notif" drafts.  We plan to submit the
> > drafts for publication when they are ready as a collective.
> > The goal is to do all this prior to IETF 103.
> >
> > While it's always nice to receive messages of support, at this time,
> > the question isn't so much if the working group supports the work than
> > if the document is ready to progress.  The chairs need to see reviews
> > that indicate thorough end-to-end reading of the text.  Of course, if
> > there are any objections, these should be brought forward now as well.
> >
> > The current version (-13) of this draft was published on Oct 4th
> > (today).  The datatracker page for the draft is here:
> >
> >    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-event-
> notifications.
> >
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Kent (and Mahesh)
> >
> >
> >
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