Re: [Netconf] WGLC on netconf-event-notifications-13

Hi Reshad,

Thanks.  Thoughts in-line...

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Reshad Rahman (rrahman)
> Sent: Tuesday, October 9, 2018 2:57 PM
> To: Eric Voit (evoit) <evoit@cisco.com>; Balázs Lengyel
> <balazs.lengyel@ericsson.com>; Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net>;
> netconf@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Netconf] WGLC on netconf-event-notifications-13
> 
> Hi,
> 
> I believe the document is ready to progress. I agree with the comments from
> Balazs on Sections 3 and 5, except that I think keeping the past paragraph in
> section 3 is worthwhile since it's a clarification.
> All my comments are nits:
> - Section 4 last sentence, s/in that draft/in that document/

updated

> - Figure 8 s/with Hint/with hint/

updated

> - A.3 Closing ) not needed?

removed

> - A.3.1 s/might be sent if over NETCONF if/might be sent over NETCONF if/

Updated.

Thanks again!
Eric

> Regards,
> Reshad.
> 
> On 2018-10-05, 10:13 AM, "Netconf on behalf of Eric Voit (evoit)" <netconf-
> bounces@ietf.org on behalf of evoit@cisco.com> wrote:
> 
>     Thanks Balazs.   Requested tweaks in Ch3 & Ch5 made.
> 
>     Eric
> 
>     > From Balázs Lengyel, October 5, 2018 8:17 AM
>     >
>     > Hello,
>     >
>     > I have reviewed the draft and I think it is ready to progress forward.
>     >
>     > Some comments minor:
>     >
>     > Generally I find the draft a bit too long and too detailed. Much of this can
> be
>     > derived from the yang language, subscribed-notifications and yang-push.
>     > Still I  can accept it; it is OK.
>     >
>     > Ch 3)
>     >
>     > s/is been received/has been received/
>     > Last paragraph) true, but to me this seems trivial. If you don't support
>     > something, don't advertise it. Still this does not harm anyone.
>     >
>     > CH 5)
>     >
>     > s/if the NETCONF session involved with the "establish-subscription"
>     > terminates,/ if the NETCONF session that carried the "establish-
> subscription"
>     > terminates/ s/RPC MUST be sent using same the NETCONF session/RPC
> MUST
>     > be sent using the same NETCONF session/
>     >
>     > regards Balazs
>     >
>     > On 10/5/2018 12:10 AM, Kent Watsen wrote:
>     > > This message starts a Last Call on draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-event-
>     > notifications-13 (a.k.a. "netconf-notif"):
>     > >
>     > >
>     > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-event-notificat
>     > > ions-13
>     > >
>     > > This, along with the restconf-notif Last Call, started in a separate
>     > > message, marks the last of the last calls on the yang push suite of
>     > > drafts. As explained before, given the size and number of documents,
>     > > the chairs decided to break the reviews up into pieces so as to get
>     > > focus on each in turn.  We chose to go top-down, starting with
>     > > yang-push and ending with the "notif" drafts.  We plan to submit the
>     > > drafts for publication when they are ready as a collective.
>     > > The goal is to do all this prior to IETF 103.
>     > >
>     > > While it's always nice to receive messages of support, at this time,
>     > > the question isn't so much if the working group supports the work than
>     > > if the document is ready to progress.  The chairs need to see reviews
>     > > that indicate thorough end-to-end reading of the text.  Of course, if
>     > > there are any objections, these should be brought forward now as well.
>     > >
>     > > The current version (-13) of this draft was published on Oct 4th
>     > > (today).  The datatracker page for the draft is here:
>     > >
>     > >    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-event-
>     > notifications.
>     > >
>     > >
>     > > Thanks,
>     > > Kent (and Mahesh)
>     > >
>     > >
>     > >
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