Re: [netmod] New Version Notification for draft-kwatsen-netmod-artwork-folding-07.txt

Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net> Mon, 24 September 2018 20:49 UTC

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Subject: Re: [netmod] New Version Notification for draft-kwatsen-netmod-artwork-folding-07.txt
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Hi Tom,

> I would like a paragraph in this I-D to the effect that editors should
> take care of this and that this phenomenon is nothing to do with the
> technique described here, a sort of non-Applicability statement so that
> we do not, in future, get too long lines as
>
>      /* optical interface func needs to expand for Fiber Channel,\
> \ SONET and SDH */
>
> instead of turning them into
>
>      /* optical interface func needs to expand
>         for Fiber Channel, SONET and SDH */


Section 4.2 addresses this.  In particular, the last line says:

  As such, it is RECOMMENDED that authors do as much as possible within
  the selected format to avoid long lines.

Good enough?


Kent // contributor