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Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net> Mon, 01 October 2018 20:15 UTC

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> At least remove YANG from the example, and I also think that
> auto-folding of tree diagrams should be strongly discouraged, so find
> a better example for (b).

Removed "YANG" and s/(e.g., tree diagrams)/, using a tool that doesn't
observe line lengths.  FWIW, pyang's --tree-line-length sometimes 
produces results worse than folded artwork.


> Also remove YANG from 4.1

Done.


> To further emphasize this, I think you should add YANG and tree
diagrams as examples in section 4.2.

You mean, as anti-examples?


Kent // contributor

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