Re: [netmod] FW: New Version Notification for draft-kwatsen-netmod-artwork-folding-07.txt

Robert Wilton <rwilton@cisco.com> Mon, 10 September 2018 07:51 UTC

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Subject: Re: [netmod] FW: New Version Notification for draft-kwatsen-netmod-artwork-folding-07.txt
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I've read -07, and would also support an WG adoption call for this 
draft.  In fact, I think that it would be quite good if we can move this 
document through to WG LC fairly expediently as well.

A couple of minor review comments:

Introduction: RFC7994 reference listed twice.

Rather than banning tabs, another option would to be convert them (of 
course, the question is then whether a tab is 2, 4, or 8 spaces ...), 
although assuming 4 spaces seems reasonable, and could be controlled via 
an input parameter.

Thanks,
Rob


On 08/09/2018 13:39, Adrian Farrel wrote:
> Speaking as a co-author, I agree with Kent that this version is ready for the WG
> to pick up.
>
> I think that discussions at f2f meetings indicated that there was interest in
> the WG in addressing this issue, and after much back and forth, the authors have
> come together with an approach that they agree on and it incorporates some
> suggestions made in Montreal.
>
> Thanks,
> Adrian
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: netmod [mailto:netmod-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Kent Watsen
>> Sent: 07 September 2018 22:59
>> To: netmod@ietf.org
>> Subject: [netmod] FW: New Version Notification for draft-kwatsen-netmod-
>> artwork-folding-07.txt
>>
>>
>> An update to the "artwork-folding" draft has been posted.
>>    - the solution is now using the "/.../" format.
>>    - the included script has been updated as well.
>>
>> We believe that this draft is ready for an adoption poll.
>>
>> Kent (and Adrian and Qin)  // authors
>>
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>>
>> A new version of I-D, draft-kwatsen-netmod-artwork-folding-07.txt
>> has been successfully submitted by Kent Watsen and posted to the
>> IETF repository.
>>
>> Name:		draft-kwatsen-netmod-artwork-folding
>> Revision:	07
>> Title:		Handling Long Lines in Artwork in Internet-Drafts and
> RFCs
>> Document date:	2018-09-05
>> Group:		Individual Submission
>> Pages:		16
>> URL:            https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-kwatsen-netmod-artwork-folding-
>> 07.txt
>> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-kwatsen-netmod-artwork-
>> folding/
>> Htmlized:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-kwatsen-netmod-artwork-folding-
>> 07
>> Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-kwatsen-netmod-
>> artwork-folding
>> Diff:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-kwatsen-netmod-artwork-
>> folding-07
>>
>> Abstract:
>>     This document introduces a simple and yet time-proven strategy for
>>     handling long lines in artwork in drafts using a backslash ('\')
>>     character where line-folding has occurred.  The strategy works on any
>>     text based artwork, but is primarily intended for sample text and
>>     formatted examples and code, rather than for graphical artwork.  The
>>     approach produces consistent results regardless of the content and
>>     uses a per-artwork header.  The strategy is both self-documenting and
>>     enables automated reconstitution of the original artwork.
>>
>>
>>
>>
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