Re: [precis] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-precis-7564bis-08: (with COMMENT)

Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> Tue, 04 July 2017 23:28 UTC

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From: Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im>
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Subject: Re: [precis] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-precis-7564bis-08: (with COMMENT)
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On 7/3/17 6:04 PM, Peter Saint-Andre wrote:
> 
> 
>> On Jul 3, 2017, at 5:54 PM, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> wrote:
>>
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>>>>
>>>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>> COMMENT:
>>>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>>>
>>>> Is the 2nd to last paragraph in 13.5 intended as actual instructions to IANA?
>>>
>>> Yes, I think so. Therefore the instruction should be provided in Section 11.1, with a forward reference to Section 13.5 for the explanation.
>>
>> Is it possible to word the text to be added to 11.1 to minimize the need for IANA to make subjective decisions?
>>
>> Thanks!
>>
>> Ben.
> 
> Yes, I will propose text tomorrow.
> 
> Peter
> 

I propose that we leave Section 13.5 as it is and add the following
paragraph to the end of Section 11.1:

   Note: IANA is requested to not make further updates to this registry
   until the issues described in [IAB-Statement] and Section 13.5 have
   been settled.

Peter