Re: [precis] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-precis-7564bis-08: (with COMMENT)

Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> Mon, 03 July 2017 23:49 UTC

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Subject: Re: [precis] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-precis-7564bis-08: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks for the review.



Sent from mobile, might be terse 
> On Jul 3, 2017, at 3:53 PM, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> wrote:
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> Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-precis-7564bis-08: Yes
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> Is the 2nd to last paragraph in 13.5 intended as actual instructions to IANA?

Yes, I think so. Therefore the instruction should be provided in Section 11.1, with a forward reference to Section 13.5 for the explanation.

Peter

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