Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial suggestions from Benjamin Kaduk's IESG review (qpack) (#4789)
afrind <notifications@github.com> Fri, 22 January 2021 22:06 UTC
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Subject: Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial suggestions from Benjamin Kaduk's IESG review (qpack) (#4789)
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@afrind commented on this pull request. Thank you for your detailed review and this PR. I have one suggestion. > +state memory it uses and signal a lower dynamic table size than the decoder +allows to propagate that fact to the decoder (see {{eviction}}). Suggestion: An encoder can limit the amount of state memory it uses by choosing a smaller dynamic table size than the decoder allows, and signaling this to the decoder (see {{set-dynamic-table-capacity}}). > @@ -1738,7 +1740,7 @@ Stream: Encoder ^-- acknowledged --^ 4 0 :authority www.example.com 5 0 custom-key custom-value2 - Size=215 + Size=214 This looks right too, but it makes me want to re-run the examples through the code I wrote to verify (I made @martinthomson's changes by hand). > @@ -1787,8 +1789,8 @@ for line in field_lines: # encode the prefix if requiredInsertCount == 0: - encodeIndexReference(prefixBuffer, 0, 0, 8) - encodeIndexReference(prefixBuffer, 0, 0, 7) + encodeInteger(prefixBuffer, 0, 0, 8) + encodeInteger(prefixBuffer, 0, 0, 7) This is a good catch, thanks. The prefix is integers, not references. -- You are receiving this because you are subscribed to this thread. Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4789#pullrequestreview-574654039
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