Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Minor TLS draft editorial corrections (#2446)

Mike Bishop <notifications@github.com> Tue, 12 February 2019 00:04 UTC

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MikeBishop commented on this pull request.



>                       1-RTT --------------->
                                               Handshake Received
                                           Rekey rx to 1-RTT keys
-                                                   Get Handshake

Perhaps it would be more appropriate to say "Install Handshake rx keys," then?  We have the separate PR forthcoming about when keys from previous levels are dropped; perhaps in this diagram we could exclusively talk about installing them.

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