Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Fix some of the nits in #3214 (#4016)

Lars Eggert <notifications@github.com> Thu, 20 August 2020 08:49 UTC

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@larseggert commented on this pull request.



> -subsequent ACK frames; see {{generating-acks}} and {{frame-ack}}.  Note that
-this requires being able to read the ECN codepoints from the enclosing IP
-packet, which is not possible on all platforms.

I added a paragraph to the previous section to clarify this.

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