Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Ekr editorial 17 3 (#2164)

janaiyengar <notifications@github.com> Sat, 15 December 2018 00:35 UTC

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janaiyengar commented on this pull request.



> @@ -3847,10 +3858,11 @@ MUST include the value of the Original Destination Connection ID field of the
 Retry packet (that is, the Destination Connection ID field from the client's
 first Initial packet) in the transport parameter.
 
-If the client received and processed a Retry packet, it validates that the
-original_connection_id transport parameter is present and correct; otherwise, it
-validates that the transport parameter is absent.  A client MUST treat a failed
-validation as a connection error of type TRANSPORT_PARAMETER_ERROR.
+If the client received and processed a Retry packet, it MUST validate
+that the original_connection_id transport parameter is present and
+correct; otherwise, it validates that the transport parameter is

```suggestion
correct; otherwise, it MUST validate that the transport parameter is
```

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