Re: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-quic-manageability-14

Paul Vixie <paul@redbarn.org> Wed, 16 March 2022 19:57 UTC

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Subject: Re: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-quic-manageability-14
To: Mirja Kuehlewind <mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com>, "quic@ietf.org" <quic@ietf.org>
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From: Paul Vixie <paul@redbarn.org>
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mirja, et al, in reviewing manageability-15, i see this text:

>    The QUIC wire image is not specifically designed to be
>    distinguishable from other UDP traffic by a passive observer in the
>    network.

i think this has an excluded middle problem, and should be changed to:

<<The QUIC wire image is specifically designed to be indistinguishable 
from other UDP traffic by a passive observer in the network.>>

this follows from RFC 7258, and is uncontroversial in the light thereof.

further to this point, i'd like to suggest adding a paragraph to the end 
of section 3.1 (Identifying QUIC Traffic):

<<Management of QUIC traffic can never be reliable, and if it becomes so 
over time, then the QUIC wire image would be forced to evolve. Therefore 
a heuristic along the lines of "any unrecognizable UDP traffic could be 
QUIC" is the least unappealing way for a network operator to 
characterize their network's UDP traffic in the QUIC era.>>

thanks in advance for your consideration.

vixie