Re: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-quic-manageability-14

"Brian Trammell (IETF)" <ietf@trammell.ch> Wed, 23 March 2022 10:17 UTC

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Subject: Re: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-quic-manageability-14
From: "Brian Trammell (IETF)" <ietf@trammell.ch>
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Date: Wed, 23 Mar 2022 11:17:04 +0100
Cc: Paul Vixie <paul=40redbarn.org@dmarc.ietf.org>, "last-call@ietf.org" <last-call@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-quic-manageability.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-quic-manageability.all@ietf.org>, "quic@ietf.org" <quic@ietf.org>, "ops-dir@ietf.org" <ops-dir@ietf.org>, Mirja Kuehlewind <mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com>
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Hi Paul,

Cutting a bit to try to get this to concrete actions on the document; will follow up on the other points in a subsequent message...

> On 22 Mar 2022, at 17:25, Paul Vixie <paul@redbarn.org> wrote:
> <snip>
> perhaps this wording will be if lesser concern to you:
> 
> <<Identification of QUIC traffic by on-path actors such as network operators is not reliable. Therefore a heuristic along the lines of "any unrecognizable UDP traffic could be QUIC" is the least unappealing way for a network operator to characterize their network's UDP traffic in the QUIC era.>>

 I don’t think this fits editorially with the rest of the document. However, I do see your point that “not designed to be distinguishable” is maybe not strong enough. I also note that there’s something hiding in the rest of Section 3.1 that we should maybe make more explicit: “this traffic is definitely QUIC” is probabilistically doable, but there are better heuristics on a per-application basis.

How about something like:

<<The QUIC wire image is not specifically designed to be distinguishable from other UDP traffic by a passive observer in the network. While certain QUIC applications may be heuristically identifiable on a per-application basis, there is no general method for distinguishing QUIC traffic from otherwise-unclassifiable UDP traffic on a given link. Any unrecognized UDP traffic may therefore be QUIC traffic.>>

?

Cheers,

Brian