Re: [Softwires] I-D Action: draft-ietf-softwire-map-08.txt

Hi Med, thank you for your comments.

When I did review the current version of unified cpe draft, I couldn't find
any kind of stuff on which the map draft should depend so please point
things out more specific to what unified cpe draft want map to be.

cheers,
--satoru

On Mon, Aug 12, 2013 at 10:53 PM, <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> wrote:

> Ole, all,
>
> I have two comments about the new version:
>
> * The document does not cite the unified CPE I-D. I think Senthil already
> raised this point to the authors, but it seems this was not taken into
> account. I suggest adding that document as a normative reference.
>
> * I-D.ietf-softwire-map-dhcp is to be listed as an example to achieve
> provisioning (other means can be supported). This ref can be cited as
> informative and not normative one.
>
> Cheers,
> Med
>
> >-----Message d'origine-----
> >De : i-d-announce-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:i-d-announce-bounces@ietf.org]
> >De la part de internet-drafts@ietf.org
> >Envoyé : lundi 12 août 2013 14:17
> >À : i-d-announce@ietf.org
> >Cc : softwires@ietf.org
> >Objet : I-D Action: draft-ietf-softwire-map-08.txt
> >
> >
> >A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> >directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the Softwires Working Group of the IETF.
> >
> >       Title           : Mapping of Address and Port with Encapsulation
> >(MAP)
> >       Author(s)       : Ole Troan
> >                          Wojciech Dec
> >                          Xing Li
> >                          Congxiao Bao
> >                          Satoru Matsushima
> >                          Tetsuya Murakami
> >                          Tom Taylor
> >       Filename        : draft-ietf-softwire-map-08.txt
> >       Pages           : 30
> >       Date            : 2013-08-12
> >
> >Abstract:
> >   This document describes a mechanism for transporting IPv4 packets
> >   across an IPv6 network using IP encapsulation, and a generic
> >   mechanism for mapping between IPv6 addresses and IPv4 addresses and
> >   transport layer ports.
> >
> >
> >The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> >https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-softwire-map
> >
> >There's also a htmlized version available at:
> >http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-softwire-map-08
> >
> >A diff from the previous version is available at:
> >http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-softwire-map-08
> >
> >
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> >
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