Re: [stir] WGLC: draft-ietf-stir-passport-rcd-09

Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Tue, 10 May 2022 15:14 UTC

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Subject: Re: [stir] WGLC: draft-ietf-stir-passport-rcd-09
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I am not sure that a change is needed, but I just made another pass through the document that raised a small question.

Looking at the following snippets from the document:

   Traditional telephone network signaling protocols have long supported
   delivering a 'calling name' from the originating side, ...

   ... The first data is a more
   traditional set of info about a caller associated with "display-name" ...

   ...  alternate presentation numbers often used in From Header field ...

I could use an explanation about the conventions being used to reference the various fields that are defined in other documents.  Single quote, double quote, and capital letters all play a role.

It is made more confusing to me because double quotes are used to identify claims and also around jargon (examples: "Caller ID" and "vet").

Russ

> On Apr 25, 2022, at 3:51 PM, Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> wrote:
> 
> This might be the longest WG Last Call in history ....
> 
> A new version was just posted: https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-stir-passport-rcd-17.txt
> 
> Regarding the ongoing WG Last Call, we have two questions:
> 
> (1) Have any of the changes introduced new issues?
> 
> (2) Have all previously raised issues are resolved?
> 
> For the STIR WG Chairs,
>  Russ
> 
> 
>> On Dec 8, 2020, at 4:30 PM, Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> wrote:
>> 
>> This is a WGLC for draft-ietf-stir-passport-rcd-09.
>> 
>> Please send reviews to the list by the end of day 22 Dec 2020.
>> 
>> If you plan to provide a review but need more time, please let us know early.
>> 
>> See <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-stir-passport-rcd/>
>> 
>> RjS
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