Re: [tcpm] feedcback on tcp-secure-05

Randall Stewart <rrs@cisco.com> Thu, 13 July 2006 18:00 UTC

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To: Pekka Savola <pekkas@netcore.fi>
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Pekka Savola wrote:
> On Thu, 13 Jul 2006, Joe Touch wrote:
> 
>>> On Thu, 13 Jul 2006, Joe Touch wrote:
>>>
>>>> The doc continues to have a detailed but somewhat incomplete discussion
>>>> of the attack scenario; the point of tcp-antispoof was to provide a 
>>>> much
>>>> more detailed version of that discussion that should not be
>>>> recapitulated but rather cited.
>>>
>>>
>>> You couldn't just simply cite it without any summary though, as
>>> antispoof is heading Informational, and doing so would likely require a
>>> down-ref.
>>
>>
>> It's not a down ref to cite an informational document informationally ;-)
> 
> 
> Sure.  But an Informative reference needs to refer to _additional_ 
> information, not _replace_ information.  So, with an informative 
> reference you will need to have at least short summary (a paragraph) of 
> the issues.
> 
Yep.. we could say something like..

For further reference information on these refer to ....

Note to Joe, the older revision of anti-spoof comes right
from the xml database... not sure why it did not snarf
your latest version..

R

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