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Re: [tcpm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14

Mark Allman <mallman@icir.org> Thu, 18 June 2020 17:43 UTC

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From: Mark Allman <mallman@icir.org>
To: Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>
Cc: Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>, Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>, tcpm <tcpm@ietf.org>, Last Call <last-call@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider.all@ietf.org, tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com>
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Subject: Re: [tcpm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14
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> We make as much progress as we can agree on which will clear some
> of the issue below.
> For any remaining issues for which you have wider consensus but
> where we cannot agree, I modify my review and the IESG decides how
> they wish to proceed.
> I am prepared to be in the rough but I have a duty to draw
> attention to concerns.

yep - sounds good.  i am going to try to flesh out the intro
paragraph a little more with some of the stuff from section 2.  but,
outside that i am not sure what to do.  i'll get a new version sent
out in a day or a few.

thanks,
allman

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