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[tcpm] draft-gont-tcpm-tcp-seq-validation

Rui Paulo <rpaulo@apple.com> Wed, 11 September 2013 17:08 UTC

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Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2013 10:08:23 -0700
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Subject: [tcpm] draft-gont-tcpm-tcp-seq-validation
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Hi,

I've been asked to review draft-gont-tcpm-tcp-seq-validation. Below are my comments. In general the draft looks good. Section 4.1 is a bit hard to review given that the text is repeated. This is something we can review again in the next draft version.

* "and thus elicits a ACK segment" -> "an ACK" 

* Section 3.4 says " (Failed) Simultaneous Connection Termination" in the TCP time sequence ASCII

* Section 4.1.  TCP sequence number validation -> text is repeated

* Section 7 doesn't look like an acknowledgement.


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Rui Paulo

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