Re: [v6ops] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-05.txt

[Alexandre Petrescu <[e-mail]>]

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Alex

Le 05/11/2023 à 17:17, Jen Linkova a écrit :
> Hello,
>
> Following the conclusion of the WGLC (thanks to everyone who
> commented!), we've submitted a -05 version with the following changes:
> 1. Making it more clear that the draft requires the network to
> delegate a SLAAC-suitable prefix, and /64 is currently required for
> SLAAC to work - but it  doesn't have to be like that in the future.
> Examples also use /64. Brian, does it address your comment?
> 2. To address most of Ole's comments:
>    2.1 Making it explicit that the draft only covers the network
> behavior, while host requirements are out of scope.
>    2.2 Clarifying that the network can support both flat and
> hierarchical models - it's up to the host to specify the hint.
> 3. Rewriting examples in the prefix length consideration section to
> make it clearer that the proposal does not require an excessive amount
> of IPv6 space.
>
>
>
> On Sun, Nov 5, 2023 at 4:54 PM <[e-mail]> wrote:
>> A new version of Internet-Draft draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-05.txt has
>> been successfully submitted by Jen Linkova and posted to the
>> IETF repository.
>>
>> Name:     draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device
>> Revision: 05
>> Title:    Using DHCPv6-PD to Allocate Unique IPv6 Prefix per Client in Large Broadcast Networks
>> Date:     2023-11-05
>> Group:    v6ops
>> Pages:    20
>> URL:      https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-05.txt
>> Status:   https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device/
>> HTML:     https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-05.html
>> HTMLized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device
>> Diff:     https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-05
>>
>> Abstract:
>>
>>     This document discusses an IPv6 deployment scenario when individual
>>     clients connected to large broadcast networks (such as enterprise
>>     networks or public Wi-Fi networks) are allocated unique prefixes via
>>     DHCPv6 Prefix Delegation (DHCPv6-PD).
>>
>>
>>
>> The IETF Secretariat
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