Re: [v6ops] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-05.txt

Jen Linkova <furry13@gmail.com> Sun, 05 November 2023 16:17 UTC

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From: Jen Linkova <furry13@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 05 Nov 2023 17:17:13 +0100
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Subject: Re: [v6ops] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-05.txt
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Hello,

Following the conclusion of the WGLC (thanks to everyone who
commented!), we've submitted a -05 version with the following changes:
1. Making it more clear that the draft requires the network to
delegate a SLAAC-suitable prefix, and /64 is currently required for
SLAAC to work - but it  doesn't have to be like that in the future.
Examples also use /64. Brian, does it address your comment?
2. To address most of Ole's comments:
  2.1 Making it explicit that the draft only covers the network
behavior, while host requirements are out of scope.
  2.2 Clarifying that the network can support both flat and
hierarchical models - it's up to the host to specify the hint.
3. Rewriting examples in the prefix length consideration section to
make it clearer that the proposal does not require an excessive amount
of IPv6 space.



On Sun, Nov 5, 2023 at 4:54 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>
> A new version of Internet-Draft draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-05.txt has
> been successfully submitted by Jen Linkova and posted to the
> IETF repository.
>
> Name:     draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device
> Revision: 05
> Title:    Using DHCPv6-PD to Allocate Unique IPv6 Prefix per Client in Large Broadcast Networks
> Date:     2023-11-05
> Group:    v6ops
> Pages:    20
> URL:      https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-05.txt
> Status:   https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device/
> HTML:     https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-05.html
> HTMLized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device
> Diff:     https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-05
>
> Abstract:
>
>    This document discusses an IPv6 deployment scenario when individual
>    clients connected to large broadcast networks (such as enterprise
>    networks or public Wi-Fi networks) are allocated unique prefixes via
>    DHCPv6 Prefix Delegation (DHCPv6-PD).
>
>
>
> The IETF Secretariat
>
>


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Cheers, Jen Linkova