Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-nvo3-bfd-geneve-13> for your review
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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-nvo3-bfd-geneve-13> for your review
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I approve the changes. Sorry for delayed reply. Thanks Santosh P K On Mon, 8 Jan 2024 at 10:42 PM, Megan Ferguson <mferguson@amsl.com> wrote: > Greetings, > > We have received all necessary approvals and are ready to move this > document forward in the publication process at this time. > > The AUTH48 status page of this document is available at > http://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9521. > > Thank you for your time and attention during AUTH48. > > RFC Editor/mf > > > > On Jan 7, 2024, at 7:15 PM, xiao.min2@zte.com.cn wrote: > > > > I approve the changes as well. > > > > > > > > Best Regards, > > > > Xiao Min > > > > Original > > From: SamAldrin <aldrin.ietf@gmail.com> > > To: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>; > > Cc: Megan Ferguson <mferguson@amsl.com>;Jeff Tantsura < > jefftant.ietf@gmail.com>;肖敏10093570;Santosh P K < > santosh.pallagatti@gmail.com>;rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org < > rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>;nvo3-ads@ietf.org <nvo3-ads@ietf.org>; > nvo3-chairs@ietf.org <nvo3-chairs@ietf.org>;matthew.bocci@nokia.com < > matthew.bocci@nokia.com>;andrew-ietf@liquid.tech <andrew-ietf@liquid.tech > >;auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>; > > Date: 2024年01月03日 02:46 > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-nvo3-bfd-geneve-13> for > your review > > Approve from my side as well. > > > > Sam > > Sent from my iPhone > > > >> On Jan 2, 2024, at 9:55 AM, Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> wrote: > >> > >> > >> Hi Megan, > >> thank you for your kind reminder. Please note that I also approve all > the proposed changes. > >> > >> Best wishes for a happy New Year! > >> > >> Regards, > >> Greg > >> > >> On Tue, Jan 2, 2024 at 9:49 AM Megan Ferguson <mferguson@amsl.com> > wrote: > >> Jeff, > >> > >> Apologies for the delayed reply. We have updated the AUTH48 status > page to reflect your > >> approval. > >> > >> Please note that we will assume your assent to any further changes > submitted > >> by your coauthors unless we hear otherwise at that time. > >> > >> The AUTH48 status page is viewable at: > >> > >> http://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9521 > >> > >> Thank you. > >> > >> RFC Editor/mf > >> > >> > >> > On Dec 19, 2023, at 7:20 PM, Jeff Tantsura <jefftant.ietf@gmail.com> > wrote: > >> > > >> > Hi Megan, > >> > > >> > I approve the changes. > >> > > >> > Cheers, > >> > Jeff > >> > > >> >> On Dec 19, 2023, at 18:04, xiao.min2@zte.com.cn wrote: > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> Hi Megan, > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> Thank you for the proposed tweaks. > >> >> > >> >> I'm fine with all the three options, and I prefer the first one. > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> Cheers, > >> >> > >> >> Xiao Min > >> >> > >> >> Original > >> >> From: MeganFerguson <mferguson@amsl.com> > >> >> To: 肖敏10093570;Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>; > >> >> Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>;Santosh P > K <santosh.pallagatti@gmail.com>;jefftant.ietf@gmail.com < > jefftant.ietf@gmail.com>;aldrin.ietf@gmail.com <aldrin.ietf@gmail.com>; > nvo3-ads@ietf.org <nvo3-ads@ietf.org>;nvo3-chairs@ietf.org < > nvo3-chairs@ietf.org>;matthew.bocci@nokia.com <matthew.bocci@nokia.com > >;andrew-ietf@liquid.tech <andrew-ietf@liquid.tech>; > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>; > >> >> Date: 2023年12月20日 01:35 > >> >> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-nvo3-bfd-geneve-13> > for your review > >> >> Xiao Min and Greg, > >> >> > >> >> Apologies if we added to the confusion! This has been updated as > discussed between the two of you. > >> >> However, we feel one of the following further tweaks might make this > text easier on the reader: > >> >> > >> >> Current: > >> >> If the BFD packet is received with the value of the Your > Discriminator field 0,. > >> >> > >> >> Perhaps: > >> >> …with the value of the Your Discriminator field set to 0,… > >> >> or > >> >> …with a Your Discriminator field value of 0,… > >> >> or > >> >> If the Your Discriminator field of the BFD packet received has a > value of 0,... > >> >> > >> >> Please let us know if one of the above is agreeable. > >> >> > >> >> The files have been posted here (please refresh): > >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9521.txt > >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9521.pdf > >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9521.html > >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9521.xml > >> >> > >> >> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh): > >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9521-diff.html > (comprehensive diff) > >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9521-auth48diff.html > (AUTH48 changes only) > >> >> > >> >> Please contact us with any further updates/questions/comments you > may have. > >> >> > >> >> We will await approvals from each of the parties listed on the > AUTH48 status page prior to moving forward to publication. > >> >> > >> >> The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: > >> >> > >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9521 > >> >> > >> >> Thank you. > >> >> > >> >> RFC Editor/mf > >> >> > >> >> > On Dec 18, 2023, at 6:09 PM, xiao.min2@zte.com.cn wrote: > >> >> > > >> >> > Hi Megan, > >> >> > > >> >> > > >> >> > > >> >> > Thank you for the revision. > >> >> > > >> >> > Considering the one rejected change, I propose one more editorial > change as below. > >> >> > > >> >> > Section #5.1 > >> >> > OLD: > >> >> > a Your Discriminator equals to 0 > >> >> > NEW: > >> >> > a Your Discriminator equal to 0 > >> >> > > >> >> > > >> >> > > >> >> > Cheers, > >> >> > > >> >> > Xiao Min > >> >> > > >> >> > Original > >> >> > From: MeganFerguson <mferguson@amsl.com> > >> >> > To: 肖敏10093570;Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>; > >> >> > Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; > santosh.pallagatti@gmail.com <santosh.pallagatti@gmail.com>; > jefftant.ietf@gmail.com <jefftant.ietf@gmail.com>;aldrin.ietf@gmail.com < > aldrin.ietf@gmail.com>;nvo3-ads@ietf.org <nvo3-ads@ietf.org>; > nvo3-chairs@ietf.org <nvo3-chairs@ietf.org>;matthew.bocci@nokia.com < > matthew.bocci@nokia.com>;andrew-ietf@liquid.tech <andrew-ietf@liquid.tech > >;auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>; > >> >> > Date: 2023年12月19日 05:38 > >> >> > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 > <draft-ietf-nvo3-bfd-geneve-13> for your review > >> >> > Xiao and Greg, > >> >> > > >> >> > Thank you for your replies. We have updated the document as > requested with the exception of the following: > >> >> > > >> >> > > Section #4.1 > >> >> > > OLD: > >> >> > > a Your Discriminator equal to 0 > >> >> > > NEW: > >> >> > > a Your Discriminator equals to 0 > >> >> > > > >> >> > > > >> >> > Please review this request as the suggested text introduces a > subject/verb agreement error. > >> >> > > >> >> > We have posted the updated files below. Please review carefully > as we do not make updates once the document is published as an RFC. > >> >> > > >> >> > The files have been posted here (please refresh): > >> >> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9521.txt > >> >> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9521.pdf > >> >> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9521.html > >> >> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9521.xml > >> >> > > >> >> > The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh): > >> >> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9521-diff.html > (comprehensive diff) > >> >> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9521-auth48diff.html > (AUTH48 changes only) > >> >> > > >> >> > Please contact us with any further updates/questions/comments you > may have. > >> >> > > >> >> > We will await approvals from each of the parties listed on the > AUTH48 status page prior to moving forward to publication. > >> >> > > >> >> > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: > >> >> > > >> >> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9521 > >> >> > > >> >> > Thank you. > >> >> > > >> >> > RFC Editor/mf > >> >> > > >> >> > > On Dec 18, 2023, at 1:29 AM, xiao.min2@zte.com.cn wrote: > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Dear RFC Editor, > >> >> > > > >> >> > > > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Thanks for your efforts. > >> >> > > Please see inline my answers to your questions and several > proposed editorial changes. > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Original > >> >> > > From: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> > >> >> > > To: 肖敏10093570;gregimirsky@gmail.com <gregimirsky@gmail.com>; > santosh.pallagatti@gmail.com <santosh.pallagatti@gmail.com>; > jefftant.ietf@gmail.com <jefftant.ietf@gmail.com>;aldrin.ietf@gmail.com < > aldrin.ietf@gmail.com>; > >> >> > > Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; > nvo3-ads@ietf.org <nvo3-ads@ietf.org>;nvo3-chairs@ietf.org < > nvo3-chairs@ietf.org>;matthew.bocci@nokia.com <matthew.bocci@nokia.com > >;andrew-ietf@liquid.tech <andrew-ietf@liquid.tech>; > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>; > >> >> > > Date: 2023年12月16日 01:10 > >> >> > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 > <draft-ietf-nvo3-bfd-geneve-13> for your review > >> >> > > Authors, > >> >> > > > >> >> > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > >> >> > > > >> >> > > 1) <!-- [rfced] Please note that the title of the document has > been > >> >> > > updated as follows: > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Abbreviations have been expanded per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 > ("RFC > >> >> > > Style Guide"). Please review. > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Original: > >> >> > > BFD for Geneve > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Current: > >> >> > > Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD) for Generic Network > >> >> > > Virtualization Encapsulation (Geneve) > >> >> > > --> > >> >> > > [XM]>>> Agreed. > >> >> > > > >> >> > > 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that > appear in > >> >> > > the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. > --> > >> >> > > [XM]>>> NVE, VAP, VNI. > >> >> > > > >> >> > > 3) <!--[rfced] For clarity, may we rephrase the run-on sentence > below? > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Original: > >> >> > > This document supports establishing multiple BFD sessions > between the > >> >> > > same pair of NVEs, each BFD session over a pair of VAPs residing > in > >> >> > > the same pair of NVEs, there SHOULD be a mechanism to control the > >> >> > > maximum number of such sessions that can be active at the same > time. > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Perhaps: > >> >> > > This document supports establishing multiple BFD sessions > between the > >> >> > > same pair of NVEs. For each BFD session over a pair of VAPs > residing > >> >> > > in the same pair of NVEs, there SHOULD be a mechanism to control > the > >> >> > > maximum number of such sessions that can be active at the same > time. > >> >> > > --> > >> >> > > [XM]>>> Agreed. > >> >> > > > >> >> > > 4) <!-- [rfced] We see a number of uses of the "/" character > separating > >> >> > > terms in this document. Please review and let us know if we > >> >> > > should adjust any of these instances to "and/or", "and", or > "or" > >> >> > > for clarity and ease of the reader. > >> >> > > --> > >> >> > > [XM]>>> I don't see a need to adjust any of them. I believe it's > common to say Ethernet/IP/UDP, Ethernet/IP, IP/UDP, etc. > >> >> > > > >> >> > > 5) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion > of the > >> >> > > online Style Guide > >> >> > > < > https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> > >> >> > > and let us know if any changes are needed. > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but > this > >> >> > > should still be reviewed as a best practice. > >> >> > > --> > >> >> > > [XM]>>> I don't see a need for any changes. Thank you for the > reminder. > >> >> > > > >> >> > > > >> >> > > [XM]>>> Besides the above answers to your questions, I propose a > few editorial changes as below. > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Section #1 > >> >> > > OLD: > >> >> > > For simplicity, NVE is used > >> >> > > NEW: > >> >> > > For simplicity, a NVE is used > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Section #4 > >> >> > > OLD: > >> >> > > TTL or Hop Limit: These MUST be set to 255 > >> >> > > NEW: > >> >> > > TTL or Hop Limit: The TTL for IPv4 or Hop Limit for IPv6 MUST > be set to 255 > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Section #4 > >> >> > > OLD: > >> >> > > Geneve specification [RFC8926] depending on > >> >> > > NEW: > >> >> > > Geneve specification ([RFC8926]) depending on > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Section #4.1 > >> >> > > OLD: > >> >> > > N-to-1 mapping between a VAP and a VNI > >> >> > > NEW: > >> >> > > N-to-1 mapping between VAPs and VNIs > >> >> > > > >> >> > > > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Section #5 > >> >> > > OLD: > >> >> > > TTL or Hop Limit: These MUST be set to 255 > >> >> > > NEW: > >> >> > > TTL or Hop Limit: The TTL for IPv4 or Hop Limit for IPv6 MUST > be set to 255 > >> >> > > > >> >> > > > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Best Regards, > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Xiao Min > >> >> > > > >> >> > > > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Thank you. > >> >> > > > >> >> > > RFC Editor/kf/mf > >> >> > > > >> >> > > *****IMPORTANT***** > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Updated 2023/12/15 > >> >> > > > >> >> > > RFC Author(s): > >> >> > > -------------- > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Instructions for Completing AUTH48 > >> >> > > > >> >> > > Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… Greg Mirsky
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… xiao.min2
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… Greg Mirsky
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… xiao.min2
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… Greg Mirsky
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… xiao.min2
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… Greg Mirsky
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… xiao.min2
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… Jeff Tantsura
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… Greg Mirsky
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… Sam Aldrin
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… xiao.min2
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9521 <draft-ietf-n… Santosh P K